Reviews for This Is How A Heart Breaks
bonniebonbon chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
awesome! so sad :(
underthelane chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I really enjoyed reading this. I like how you got the quote in there. There were little to no grammar/spelling mistakes, making it even more enjoyable to read. Thanks for joining the challenge! :)
Neko-chan2604 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
You used the line that Jace said to Clary! Aww! Its a really cute story! How do you enter these contests and stuff?
Angelus Draco chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Poor Hermione and Draco.

:(

Lovely little one shot

Laters
truces chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
The writing was fine, but my issue was that Hermione seemed kind of OOC. I mean, she doesn't mind that Draco's a Death Eater? And it seemed like she wanted to be one with him! ('And I didn't choose to be a Muggleborn, but I am.') The Hermione I know always seemed proud of her muggle heritage. XD However, you used the prompt very literally, so kudos to you. :D
Ima Braxton chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
OMG! You should write more to this it is verry good!