|Reviews for Out Of Reach|
| XxFire-PhoenixxX chapter 8 . 2/15
I love this! And I love to see more of this! Though it looks like you're not going back *sulks
I think I saw a deviant art like this... U know the groping thing... I love SanjkoxMarko but not enough as MarcoxAce :D so how will Teach betray them.. ? Will Marco have a break down when that happens..? Seeing you can be pretty sadistic bout her.. Anyway UPDATE!
| XxFire-PhoenixxX chapter 9 . 8/2/2014
I have a question will marko get a flashback infront of sanjiko and need to be seeziure ?
| yoloswag121 chapter 7 . 4/17/2014
Does Zoroko mean sadistic in sad ?
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
is Sachi a female version of Thatch?
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/22/2013
.YOU! Fem!marco/Marko are my most favorite fanfictions in the WORLD! I was having a pretty crappy day today but this completely made me the happiest person in the world to know I'm not the only one who fucking LOVES Marko :D please continue you've earned a special seat in my fanfic heart. 3
| azab chapter 9 . 5/7/2013
I loved it a lot :)
| Bluebird42 chapter 9 . 5/6/2013
I reeaaallllyyyyy like this chapter! It was adorable! The parts with Anne getting tossed overboard and the shower scenes were my favorite (so like the whole chapter) xD.
Kinda bummed with the sporadic updates, BUT! What can you do, eh? Hope everything clears up and works out for you so you can update whenever you can. Hopefully soon *hint hint*. xD
| Pokabu chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
Adore the interaction here, as always. And Luffyko being awed by Marko is adorable. xD
| alniyat chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
Loved the part with Anne and Luffyko!
Leave it to Luffyko to state something like that like it's the most obvious thing in the world. But hey, it certainly makes it easier on Anne hehehee
Those two are so cute together :)
I did wonder when didn't respond to the part about the spying in my last review. Now I know why ;)
So it was Tea? Heh I guess Teach/Tea will always be a creep, no matter what story or gender. But why exactly is she spying on Marko and Sanjiko? ...is she interested in Marko? But then why spy on Sanjiko too? Or is it something else that she wants? Hmm...and then the new division.
Sorry for all the questions (that you probably can't answer without spoiling the story), couldn't help myself! xD
This chapter opened up sooo many questions and possibilities. Can't wait to find out what will happen!
-Really? You'd be willing to write something like that? :D
As for Shanks...true, true he and Hawky make an awesomely hilarious couple. x)
Till the next update! /off to read the new fic ;)
| azab chapter 8 . 4/3/2013
i loved it a lot :)
| Bluebird42 chapter 8 . 4/3/2013
Yes! More AnneLuffyko! You made Teach a girl. It surprised me at first, I didn't know it was him until the laugh. Please update soon, I was antsy for this chapter. xD
| Pokabu chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
"You're a sad person, aren't you?"
Sachi's life in a nutshell. Her suffering at the hands of her pranks backfiring should be made into a side story! xD
| azab chapter 7 . 3/31/2013
i loved it a lot :)
| alniyat chapter 7 . 3/27/2013
Heh so that was Sachi spying and plotting. That meanie! Of all the bugs on the planet it had to be a cockroach x) /shudder
Never pinned Sanjiko as the one to be afraid of bugs xD
Loved that part! She has my sincerest sympathies though. Can't say I react any better. Unfortunately. /blush
At least she has Marko to defend her and kill all creepy crawlies that Sachi manages to find and smuggle into her kitchen. Marko to the rescue! Heheheee
Are you going to pair up Sachi and Zorako? You mentioned it as a possibility a few chapters ago but I don't remember you saying anything definite on it. It would be good for that green haired grouch though...and maybe she'd be able to help Sachi find something else to focus on besides pranks ;) (Marko would be grateful I'm sure :P )
As for your writing, you can probably guess my opinion on it from my very enthusiastic reviews. xD
Writing works differently for everyone I guess. Some need to have everything planned out beforehand and some can't work like that at all. Go with whatever works for you :)
Ahh you are probably right. I think too many people like the idea of Makino with Shanks and only Shanks. Well at least you know that if you ever do write something with that pairing (no matter how crackish it may be) you'll have one supporter at least. :D
Till the next chapter!
| daughterofthesea98 chapter 7 . 3/27/2013
Love this story