Reviews for RC14: Break Time
zd19160rc.colshado chapter 10 . 11/28/2015
A satisfiying ending. the previous chapters were so good you could feel what straker was going through in the silent stories lwith perhaps a few more operatives in differing time frames ? well onlyif you want to. Or perhapes thats something i could try eventually but you definately are the master of this type of l lightcudder. plesae excuse spelling s very early in the am read through until then .very much enjoyed re reading the whole story.
zd19160rc.colshado chapter 4 . 11/28/2015
ooh worrisome indeed. tension certainly building herenice touch adding a lost child.
zd19160rc.colshado chapter 2 . 11/28/2015
Ouch Straker must have been tired to pick up an alien object even if told it was inert. Works well and keeps you wondering what its effects are. loe reading this as all your stories.
zd19160rc.colshado chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
loved it Nice to see Alec handling things on occasion.