|Reviews for Comprehending Catharine|
| melymely chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I love the Eli/Adam dinamic you write, that is missing in the actual show...
Ok so we are around the middle of season ten, with a more or less dark and snarky Eli?
You sure are taking a risk here, he is interested in her, just deniing it, we saw it wirth Clare at the beggining, his hot and cold demeneaor. The new element is a strong headed Catharine. I like how you write her the way she didn't take bullshit from Eli, that she's ready to fight him back.
There's a history behind every person, so I guess you're going to develop hers little by little, because you're not that much of a gank without some personal damage being done at some point... I may guess that being bitther from the start has a reason, so I'll wait and see, but I didn't get it by now.
Little more to say, you nail the technical aspects of the writing with a fluent text so... So far is interesting, observing Eli in a new scenary I mean.
| DylanC chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
This is good...really good. well done! *applause* you should continue . :)