Reviews for Colorless Wind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting little piece- you write dialogue very well. I would prefer it with perhaps a little more description surrounding the dialogue- perhaps some scene-setting or character work? Formatting in full paragraphs might also help, since it comes across as a little bit of a wall of text right now. Good luck x |
![]() ![]() She's to powerful! But at least she has some witness such as Void, absolute zero andextremly high tempature. There's one thing that i can only wander is she LV 10 or 9? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...how does anyone defeat Colourless Wind then? In AW there's no such thing as an avatar with no weakness. |