|Reviews for Colorless Wind|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
An interesting little piece- you write dialogue very well. I would prefer it with perhaps a little more description surrounding the dialogue- perhaps some scene-setting or character work? Formatting in full paragraphs might also help, since it comes across as a little bit of a wall of text right now. Good luck x
| zennone chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
She's to powerful! But at least she has some witness such as Void, absolute zero andextremly high tempature. There's one thing that i can only wander is she LV 10 or 9?
| Tusjecht chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
...how does anyone defeat Colourless Wind then? In AW there's no such thing as an avatar with no weakness.