Reviews for A Pyrrhic Victory
iTapN Nova chapter 12 . 2/14
Slype99 Son of Poseidon chapter 23 . 2/4
Amazing stoty. Hooefulky you'll continue the sequel
Nemesis dan Impyrean chapter 14 . 12/11/2016
I love fics where I can just hate on Annabeth and Thalia and every other ****ing girl! Especially when they accuse him of stuff that weren't his own choices. They're such *****es, you know? And, no, fanfiction isn't censoring my words
TheDragonofNeptune chapter 23 . 6/19/2016
TheDragonofNeptune chapter 17 . 6/19/2016
jackjones15660 chapter 6 . 5/3/2016
I really wabt an explenation on why Sally would Marry Gabe in this story. It makes no sense if he is not a half blood. Gabe was only their to hide Percys scent.
Ghostiesftw chapter 23 . 2/13/2016
Is the sequel still on hiatus or will it be updated soon? I would appreciate a pm because I enjoyed this story a lot
BelieverOfEverything chapter 9 . 1/14/2016
Did you get Annaneth,s project idea from The Mortal Instruments? You know, Valentine reached Jace that "to love is to destroy"?
the Dreamer chapter 18 . 4/8/2015
I really loved your story until you progressed too much into the relationships. Percy and Annabeth had questions to ask each other and Annabeth doesn't know Grover. She also didn't mention the abuse or other topics Percy mentioned while he was drugged and looked like a blond. You also skipped the training, which I was looking forward to after the cliffhanger about becoming a great swordsman, and totally confused everyone. Now Percy and Annabeth's mother know about the Olympians and the readers have little clue. In addition, Annabeth had no idea about the Olympians and would be confused upon hearing the term "son of the sea". Not just percabeth, but Thalia and Luke also progressed too quickly. Thalia can't be "charmed by his smile" if she is still hurt about his disappearance which US READERS don't know about. You leave out too information and progress too quickly. I had loved the story, but there is too much I'd like to change and cannot keep reading. Please rewrite and don't take this as a negative comment. Thank you and I hope to see more stories.

the Dreamer
Guest chapter 14 . 2/10/2015
Heh, dying whale noises.
zap chapter 7 . 1/27/2015
interesting line breaks
thing makes the "X"s look slightly different sizes
SMHeveryday chapter 15 . 1/6/2015
How can I possibly express the happiness I get while reading your fanfiction? :) Although during the start of the story it was a bit boring and dragging, I really ADORE the way you stuck with the original thing (you know, Bianca's death and Nico being angry with Percy, and the Olympians thingy). This chapter ended exceptionally well and I love you for giving me a good fanfiction to read :)
TidesAtMidnight chapter 23 . 1/1/2015
I can't wait! This was a great story. May the odds be ever in your favor. What up! Hunger Games reference! (Who knows who says that? :))
jasongraceless chapter 25 . 12/31/2014
RemainsoftheSphinx chapter 18 . 12/22/2014
*Tries hard not to laugh* Umm... I think you meant to use the word assess, earlier... you spelled it 'asses' and that, my fine writing friend, is ass in the plural. Just thought you ought to know...

By the way: loving the story, very... suspenseful.
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