Reviews for Pistol Whipped
She Who Wears The Tainted Halo chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
I feel like I've been dipped in pure lust! This was just so raw, so dirty, and very sadomasoschist like. I wish more people wrote like this cause the loving, fluffy, vanilla sex gets old sometimes.
Aria6 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
I really, really like this. I wish I could write violent smut this well. :)
Caro-Kitty chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
I feel like this is an accurate depiction of how they would be if they were together. They are both so violent and explosive. Those traits wouldn't just go away because they love each other. Beautifully written as per usual!
A GrimmShiro Fan chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Words cannot describe how much I love this. xxx
hichi123 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
What ok I like this story too but grimmy is mean choking or sweet shiro
TealEyedBeing chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
*fans self* whoo, girl, you amaze me with your stuff, seriously. geezus on crackers, air, teach me how to breathe again
Yaoi-lover413 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Oh...my...gods...
This was so wrong in so many ways..and I fucking love it! Just so fucking amazing! .
For some reason this part:

" Behind him, Grimmjow threw his head back, baring his throat as a moan so sinful it could have been made by the devil himself escaped."

,hit me in the face..I find it utterly beautiful! O_O to the point where I'm temped to grab a pretty piece of paper, do my best at writing, putting your name on it, and put it on my wall..seriously..

This is sooo going in my "must re-read over and over again"-folder!

Again, epic! 8D
Black Storm Van Pendragon chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
'Pistol' whipped indeed X'3 Yus, I thoroughly enjoyed it and no ya haven't lost touch at all in writing smut...*melts into a puddle, waving a surrender flag*

*giggles* I kinda like how ya ended it with fluff after like the first 99.9 percent of it is rough violent lust, it's almost so out of the blue in an odd way there, though it's a given during a post romp bliss XD Awwww...*squirms*

I'm kinda envious of those 'lucky' policemen, I wanna be right there *whines childishly and gets hit upside the head with a baton*

*snorts that the thought of Grimmjow's catch phrase being "You're so pretty when you cry"* I bet that what he said to Shiro when they first met/fought XD
MMagnet chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I have no motivation to write a proper review, that being said keep in mind I highly enjoyed this chapter.

Variety and the element of roughouse sex and also the interactions between the two fit perfectly with the themes you constructed.

Highly impactive and a nice sense of variety between the characters and the fic itself.

Thanks.
RaneyLee chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Awesome song, and an awesome smut story to go with it. Awesome writing style as well. Great job! :) This was hot and steamy and lots of goood dirty smut ;) FAV!
SexyBleachGuys chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I liked it! I really love Grimmjows "Your so pretty when you cry." I dunno why, its just so beautiful to me. Im really sorry about not reviewing Dangerous yet, Im gonna do that after this. I just started college classes and its a very fast paced course. After three days we have a test on the first five chapters! Ugh, my time has been very busy! But, right now Ive got five minutes left of lunch break to write you a review, so here I go!
GuSiRuLi chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Glad you had fun writing this! I'm sure your readers had a better time than you though! Hahahaha
I couldn't help but feel it was a bit of one-sided agression, at least the mentioned part, since Shiro pretty much only got to scratch, bite and throw Grimmjow on the floor once, but hey! I'm not really complaining, just making a... note out of it? (I'm not sure if this is the English... 'idiom' I was searching for, sorry). I get Grimmjow is the one with more dominance but I'd have liked to see Shiro throw a few punches or kicks as payback for all the biting, spanking, hair-pulling, etc, mwah ha ha ha

Thanks for sharing and for your hard work Shadow!

Gusi
Boogermeister chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Very interesting. Sorry but that's all I could think of, with all the violent and blood and the smutty sex in between!LOL
Beccabu32 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
God that was really really good
jakondas chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I'm not a fan of abusive anythings, but as rough as this is... I'm not sure it qualifies as abuse. Both parties are grown ups, they obviously care about each other, and are both enjoying the fighting/sexual experience. If one or the other felt like they were being taken advantage of, or tried to get the other to stop without success, then I'd say it was abuse. Didn't looks particularly friendly through most of it, but I think there is mutual acceptance here; they both know what was about to happen, and neither one of them looked like they wanted to avoid it.

Also, love Marilyn Manson!