Reviews for The Laser Pointer
eenayde chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Lol, buddy! This is seriously, honestly, so hilarious! Oh gosh... Great story. Even though it doesn't have a plot.
FluffyDragonsLiveInMyHouse chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
I'm dying oh my god.

Why did no one think to give the Akatsuki a laser pointer before?! Omg this is so funny I can't even-

Thank you. Thank you so much for making this!
Of course Zetsu defies logic...
LolzYukari chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
HAHAHA This is hilarious! At first when I read the thing (I forgot what it's called) It sounded like it would end in smut, but so glad it didn't! It's so funny. Love how at first Hidan and Deidara were laughing and in the end they are frighten for their life. I guess when the Akatsuki enter their rooms, the'er going to see them studying all types of religion just to find a way to get rid of it (But i'm pretty sure Zetsu did a good job himself, so they don't need it) Aww man, I love this soo much now XD
1Aryana chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Wow, that was wonderful! I am shocked with it. Didn't see that coming. Very good! :) And aw... no more yaoi writing... :(
PMK nut chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
hahahaha, omg this is funny xD

PMKnut xx