Reviews for A Heartbeat Away
Celebrindal01 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
I love it!

I just started watching the serie recently, and I keep thinking how Tom and Hal would make
an adorable couple. 3

I like your OS, it's well written, you stayed true to the caracters of all of them.
And the way their relation evolves, it seems just right, little by little, without even really
showing it or putting words for it.

I really enjoyed reading it! : )
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I like how you shift from one scene to the next so seamlessly, which can be difficult when you're doing time jumps at the same time. It's a sweet exploration of Hal and Tom's relationship, and I especially liked how Annie, Leo and Pearl contributed to the story. This is a wonderful fic! :D
Bree chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
To be honest, canon-wise, this is ridiculous, but you stayed true(ish in toms case i guess) to the who the characters were and it was really good.
HopeCoppice chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
My friend linked me to this and said 'You have to read this beautiful fic' and I really couldn't agree more, it's gorgeous. Thank you for sharing it!
redrachxo chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This was absolutely gorgeous. It was so believable how you described Hal's thoughts, mannerisms, his way of speaking and interacting with others. Loved how you introduced the importance of Tom's heartbeat and carried it through until the the end of the fic. Really gorgeous. xo
Funsoup chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
! This was lovely !
john lumb chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
a high standard of writing. You managed to nIL the tghree main characters, but particulafrly Hal and Tom. More please
kingdomofrain chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Aww this was cute