Reviews for motivating forces
Jbug chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
Wonderful story!
Lokken.8 chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Great little story!
Zeki Young chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
This is such a beautiful study of Martha and how she and Beckett relate.
GT500RonSmith chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
That was nice! The show skipped all of that lovely stuff! Really sweet!
Mark C chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This was wonderful.

I liked how you showed what Kate and Martha were going through while Rick and Alexis were still in Paris before returning home. They certainly kept each other company and I thought it was great that you had Martha tell Kate some stories about a young Rick Castle.

Got a kick out of how Martha wanted that sign up for when Rick and Alexis returned. The really funny part was when Martha was putting on Kate.

The ending was very sweet.
FromParis chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
I know it's a bit late but truth is I just discovered the alert in my former email box this morning, so ...
I like scenes between Martha and Kate, there are so full of wisdom and serenity.
I wish the TV show had more of them honestly.
dopeysac chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Oh I love how it's a take on Martha and Kate! You captured Martha right on the nose! Great story!
Addicted1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Lovely story. Your characterization of Martha is as lovely, vibrant, and genuine as Susan Sullivan's performance, and the exploration of her relationship with Beckett here is just beautiful. The entire piece, start to finish, is pitch-perfect. Thank you for filling out the family scene from this episode, and you should always keep writing.

Thanks again.
B.anon chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Lovely - you wrote Martha and Kate together beautifully.
anon chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Absolutely magnificent!
Lydian Stone chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I love this! Everything from Martha feeding Kate's coping mechanism by drying the dishes to the image of a melodramatic 10 uear old Castle running away to join the circus. I think you painted both Martha and Kate perfectly, and were spot on with Castle indirectly through Martha.
Twyger chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Nice to have everyone back where they all belong. Loved how Martha is humanized and made more rounded than her character on tv. She is such a pistol! They make a great family. It rang true with how Kate needed to sleep in Rick's spot to just smell his smell before falling asleep. So sweet. Thank you.
lp1983 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Aw, I'd love a scene with Martha and Kate bonding. I think Kate needs that. This was great.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Ugh, why are you so amazinggg. I LOVE that you've been doing post eps every week, and of course they're always perfect. :)
Deb838 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
A perfect insert that wasn't shown ;)
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