Reviews for Pokemon: Starting Off Right
TheBlackFlamedPhoenix chapter 13 . 10/4
ok malamar and gyrados are both in water 2 ash gets an egg
ShadowPhoenix121 chapter 13 . 9/24
Please do more. I love this story.
ShadowPhoenix121 chapter 12 . 9/24
Awwwwww! This is how it should have been. Thank you for Ash is not a douche bag in this. Very much appreciate it.
dragonman11 chapter 13 . 9/14
Very good chapter as for your question at the end I would give gerados to ash's mom and have him trade the other two for another dragon pokemon like axew or begon
Shrouded Absol chapter 13 . 8/28
Don't write them out, they could just stay on Oak's Ranch or Gyarados could be trained by Lance and Kadabra by Sabrina while Scyther stays with the others.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/28
Dr1zzy chapter 13 . 8/18
Great story hoping for a new chapter!
Edmonton58 chapter 13 . 8/8
ash could get some more pokemon while training that are from other regions as well as learn about mega evolution for his 3 starters.
Nicholas Foster chapter 13 . 7/31
it is a shame you don't update anymore as I was really enjoying this fanfic.
ShadowStorm8 chapter 13 . 7/23
Please have Ash get a Cloyster or Lapras because he doesn't have an ice type yet. Ice types are really overlooked in my personal opinion.
Len Stormcrow chapter 13 . 7/18
Well done I love it
Len Stormcrow chapter 12 . 7/18
Wow that was intense
Len Stormcrow chapter 11 . 7/18
Wow that was awesome
Len Stormcrow chapter 10 . 7/18
Len Stormcrow chapter 9 . 7/18
Wow well done.
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