|Reviews for Love For A Brother|
| Thugs Bunny 009 chapter 1 . 6/3
Horrible unfortunately. The structure was abysmal, the characterization was poor, and the story telling was equally bad. I like the idea of Ichigo fucking his fuck-able sisters, but the way it was presented here was all wrong. You either need to take your time to set up a believable romance between any set of characters let alone siblings or provide a reasonable backstory so the audience can overlook that they're together from the off.
Neither was provided here. The structure didn't make the chapter any less cringeworthy I'm afraid. I highly suggest reading other fics to get a better grasp of structuring sentences correctly to avoid burning your audience's eyes away
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
Sick. Poor grammer
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
This story is awful graphic but still good
| Get real chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
Like you could have a wife! That was the funniest and best line written in this whole piece of trash. Give your hand a break and go find a real girl.
| dbzsotrum9 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
wait, so in this Yuzu and Karin aren't twins? 2nd, when did they go to America let alone Houston? couldn't you have told us that...
okay, now forgetting that, this is a nice story (though making her not blood related to Ichigo was... but great story :P
| Rythik74 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Much better than your previous one, and quite hot story as well.