|Reviews for All the Right Moves|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31
I'm not sure if you're writing for the fandom anymore. The Batman Beyond movie happens to be on, and it made me think of this story. I hope you decide to finish it someday, though that may be unlikely since it's been 2 years since an update. Hope all is going well with your other writing endeavors. If you are planning to continue the story, your fans definitely would love to read more. Take care.
| TheAmazingCharlee chapter 6 . 1/19/2016
Okay one, that line about the joystick had me in absolute tears omg!
And that "oh baby" had me feeling a little Beyoncé-ish
| TheAmazingCharlee chapter 2 . 1/18/2016
"Call me when it's important, and not a moment before."
-Batman, Justice League, Secret Society
She's starting to 'Bruce' her way out of things.
| Spirit Of The Black Wolf chapter 14 . 11/10/2015
Amazing chapter looking forward for your next update
| Del21 chapter 14 . 7/29/2015
Yeah a little less now lol, still it will be interesting to see where you take the story from here. Just try and update before you reach the next life huh, not a lot of these Terry/Max stories out there that are not straight smut lol.
| chocolate1 chapter 14 . 6/27/2015
Yeah I definitely hate you less after reading through to the end but I'm also sad that this story is going back on hiatus. Great to see Terr coming around thanks to his love Max ;) When he made the first move and Max finally didn't resist I was like YAY! I believe only through each other that they will be able to navigate and understand all the responsibilities of being Gotham's heroes and protectors. Ok sweeties the loving and after glow is over and now its back to work LOL!
Still live out your dreams and get that money!
| T2 Angel chapter 14 . 6/26/2015
Okay, I don't hate you. Not as much, anyway. LOL! I'm joking! I can't hate you, Kyo! I love any update or story or book you ever do. Doesn't matter the format.
However, if I may be so bold, Ms. Kyoko, allow me to play your advocate for a moment: to all who read this review, like you, I love this story and am constantly on the lookout for more additions. However, Kyo is doing AWESOME as a novel writer, with each book being bigger and better than the last. I want this story to continue just as much as all of you, if not more so, but trust her. She does know what she's doing and she is phenomenal at it. Give her time. She's got this!
Now, then, my review: Kobra is swinging for the damn fences on this one! Quick acting poison, openly attacking Batman, and kidnapping Max's sister. This is not a game. Have I said all that before? Feels like I have. Oh, well. Moving on! As usual, any Terry/Max-getting-it-on scene you do is hot and this one is no exception. It's about time they get over this and just admit it already! Yes, it could end badly but it could work too. Though, I can't really blame Max after Bruce told her. But, like Terry said, he isn't Bruce. Who knows? This could work.
I now have two main concerns: what the hell is Kobra really up and what's going on with Melissa. I'm worried about the questions she'll ask and what she'll remember. Whatever happens next, all sides better step their game up. Things are getting interesting.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 14 . 6/25/2015
Dang that got intense:)
| Jovianokami chapter 14 . 6/25/2015
Yay! Everything work out...for now. Glad to see Terry and Max taking a step forward bit there still much to be done. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the work you put into them. :)
| JariahSynn chapter 14 . 6/24/2015
So. Much. Tender! I got to have more sooon!
I can wait several eternities for the finish, patient panther over here. ;)
| highlander348 chapter 14 . 6/24/2015
Oh they finally made love! That is wonderful! I hope they catch that villain in the next chapter! :)
| SilentPony chapter 13 . 5/13/2015
OH COME ON! MAX AND TERRY NEED TO BONE, LIKE RIGHT FUCKING NOW!
| Jovianokami chapter 13 . 2/24/2015
Yes! I do so love this story. OH is Terry going to live? Or was it just a buff on Kobra part? Max my dear what are you going to do? Thank goodness Melissa okay but I wonder if that going to make her question what going on and how Max is involved.
| keke1208 chapter 13 . 1/27/2015
Loving it so far!
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 13 . 1/22/2015
monkey and company formed a line kick you in the pants. You were no where to be found.