Reviews for The Shadow and the Sea
SwordsOfEternalLight chapter 3 . 4/25/2016
I think what Toa Nonny said about this story just about sums it up. This is like a canon story. You don't write like Greg Farshtey, but the plot, the characters, all that stuff was of Farshtey quality
The one story critique: Couldn't they have used a klakk?
And then there's a bunch of arguments rebutting that, like Shadow Takanuva might not have allowed them to leave, or Hahli might not have even known about klakks, or...uh...something.
So the way you did it was good.
Which means good story!
SwordsOfEternalLight chapter 2 . 4/24/2016
Oh. Wow.
I don't know why I didn't read this earlier.
This is a really well-written story. I'm going to finish reading it first and then review on its merits
kenyizsu chapter 3 . 5/27/2015
This was AWESOME! :D I'm a huge fan of such detailed characters and you did a great job!
Toa Nonny chapter 3 . 8/5/2014
Awesome story, very well written. It reads like a canon story. The "good" Teridax has intrigued me since he came into the Matoran universe. I loved reading this story.
Toaofwriting chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
This was beautiful. You've done extremely well with this. Great job.
BionicleFuzzy chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
Wow, this story was so good! You are such a excellent writer! I love the complex chemistry going on between the characters.
Comment person chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
This was really a great story, I enjoyed it very much. The structure was a little cluttered, but it was readable after a second glance. The flow of the story as a whole seemed almost exactly like the flow in the books, and the ending was just right for this kind of story.

The characterization was excellent, especially Makuta's. Hali and Jaller's interactions were the most heartwarming to me.

From, Comment person
Guest chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Woo Hoo! That was a great story! Good Job!
Not a Guest 22 chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Great Fic! I enjoyed it greatly, and thought it well done.

Good Job!
Meridian Prime chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
You have taken one of my favorite underdeveloped characters and made a masterpiece with him. Seriously. Your characterization of Alt-Teridax is just perfect, and this is a fantastic little story. Keep up the good work!