|Reviews for One Magic|
| pokemon-35055 chapter 3 . 3/11
good story hope you keep it up
| dragontear365 chapter 3 . 1/7
Could you please write more to the story?
Because i realllllllllllllyyyyyyyy like you story so far :-)
Keep up the freat work!
| Meteor Gin chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
this is SSoooo Good! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT! XD
| Trashcat chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
I just stumbled upon this, and what little is here so far has been quite enjoyable. These are two series that mesh well together but don't get a lot of attention around here, there's only one other good crossover that I'm aware of. So far you've done a good job of integrating the worlds with the Blue thing and giving the fic a direction from the start. Of course the hard part is with the introductions and merger out of the way to keep up the pace with a good story and idea's.
The writing is quality is decent enough, nothing spectacular but also nothing to really criticize. I'm generally a fan of longer chapters but you have the right pace going here.
The only small knit-pick I have is that if the Slayers group has been teleported by magic from Blue Dragon/Chaotic Blue, and they now need magic from Blue Dragon to use it again, why would they assume they're still in the outer world? Considering in Try they fought in an attempted invasion from a different world, and they know the gem they found contained magic from yet another of the 4 worlds, I would have thought it should occur to them that they may not be in Kansas anymore.
| Saisaici - The Helper chapter 3 . 5/2/2013
this sound like a good story so fall.
i awess want a Fairy tail, Slayers crossover with Filia in it! i cant wait to see when they discover that she is a dragon!
| Han-Ko chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
Great fic you have here, and this third chapter has a good lenght D. I am curious of how they will react when the know the other fairy tail members. Good luck )
| Lanky Nathan chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
Nice, nice. That was a good first effort. Not much I can see that needs any changing so well done! Perhaps a longer chapter would be pleasant but I can deal.
Unfortunately, I'd like to say you'll get more reviews but writing an obscure crossover like this will make things difficult. Most people suck anyway and don't leave anything. So keep in mind that while you mightn't get all that many reviews, it doesn't mean any less of you as a writer, you just picked a really tricky topic.
Best of luck in any case!
| Lanky Nathan chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
Very nice. Yeah it was a bit short but it covered what you needed to say. Let's see what chap no.3 has in store!
| Lanky Nathan chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Woo Woo Woo! It's finally happened! XD you have no idea how excited I am!
Ok! Let's see what we got D
Firstly, the story flows far better than what I think you believe. It reads fluently and it's easy to pick who's talking at what time. Grammar and all that rubbish is spottless save for one itty bitty mistake up the top.
"The red haired sorceress was currently trying lifting a large mace with both her hands"
"The red haired sorceress was currently trying to lift a large mace with both her hands"
A simple typo I'd think that to be.
On another note, while I like the description, I'll give you a little tip for the future. When writing, pretend no one has any idea what you are talking about. While that helps with people who haven't read one of the crossovers before (like me), it also helps breathe another layer of realisim into the story. Most everyone knows what FT looks like, but I still go out of my way to describe what they look like.
I could go on but I think that's enough rambling for now.
Don't be afraid or ashamed of what you write ) It's a hell of a lot better than my first attempt and I can say that if you keep at it, you'll be racking up 1000 reviews in no time. My only complaint is that you waited so long to post it!
| Rybalov chapter 2 . 3/5/2013