Reviews for My home is gone, but I'll help get yours back if I can
SpaghettiArmy chapter 11 . 7/24/2015
Please update soon! I love this story so much! It'd be cool if they could somehow see a flashback of her life. See how horrible her world is and the people she's lost and stuff and then see if they respect her more.
NeonChemical chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
This story is just completely gorgeous and breathtaking, details are thick and gives an amazing scene of what is happening, freaking lovely, this deserves to be more notices, it's just like a real book.
NobodySpecial chapter 11 . 6/25/2015
Hey! Just wanted to say you're doing a fantastic job and I love this story so much! :-) Can't wait for another update!
TrippinOnLife chapter 11 . 6/14/2015
Loving the story! Cant wait to see what happens next!
Lalaithiel chapter 10 . 6/10/2015
I saw you updated but took it down? I have been following your story from the begining and I do like some of the changes you've made, I do miss some of the humor she has. You know, pancakes and blindness lol! I feel That some of the dwarves have mood swings and are too ooc. Balin for instance. He needs to be more grandpa like. I feel like if anyone would be hostle toward our girl it would be Gloin or Nori. Not enough Thorin time! I really do think they should end up together. He would understand her better than anyone I think and they both would benefit from each other. I love how you've made her to be able to take care of herself. She's awesome! She is emotionally unstable yes and she has a lot of pain to work through. Maybe a certain someone could help her out in that manner? *waggles eyebrows suggestively* I hope you keep the part where she talks about the C virus and has her break down. I love this story and will be very sad if you give up on it! I literally jumped up and down when I saw your update. I hope you are well! 3
shishiwastaken chapter 11 . 6/12/2015
I think the only thing that rubbed me the wrong way was the major change you made to Rivendale's structure. It's a house-like-mansion but you turned it into... a medieval kingdom. Is there any reason? Please tell me there is because a major change like this needs a better reason than 'just because.' Those dumb dumb dummy head dwarves and their inability to see that they are in the exact same position as her. I actually got mad on her account while reading this. I started around 2 am but didn't finish until 3 because I continuously stopped to vent.
Nice Egan chapter 11 . 6/11/2015
Oh I'm so happy that you remembered my suggestions :)
Will her new friend Sudryl escort her?
Although this chapter did have a lot of tension I do believe it was important for the story and of course I liked this chapter!
I wonder if she will decide to continue her journey with the company despite Basin...
I was just imagining how would be if Alicia and Sudryl joined the company, maybe it would make the dwarfs less prejudiced against elfs from Rivendell. I'm sorry I have to many suggestions!
And one thing, I liked how you have put her interactions with Thorin, although they are few it visible that he respects her.
I'm also doing my own fanfiction but have been a little lost with too many ideas because I want to write a crossover between the hobbit and Harry Potter...too many ideas...
Keep updating, your story gets better with each chapter )
SakuraDragomir chapter 10 . 6/10/2015
Great chapter
I love Alicia with Thorin.
They both lost family and friends to war.
They are both fighters and warriors.
They are both stubborn,loyal,smart and wise.
I can't wait to see them together.
They should get to know each other better.
xXxBadassAngelxXx chapter 10 . 6/7/2015
Your story is quite a one of a kind, isn't it :)? I do really hope you update again.. though don't feel obligated or pressured by us especially since you've your own life to live. Take your time, we (or at least I am) are very grateful for your stories and creativity :).
Nice Egan chapter 10 . 6/5/2015
I'm so sorry I only saw your update now
I'm glad Alicia was found and rescued!
I hope she decides to stay in middle earth, although I understand why she wants to go back...
I would love to see Alicia with Thorin, both are fighters that have seen a lot and lost a lot...they both deserve a happy ending.
Will she be able to bring her people to middle earth? It's a question that pops into my head ;)
Lalaithiel chapter 10 . 4/26/2015
Oh my gosh I squeaked so loudly when I saw your update. Your story is by far is one of my favorites. As for the relationship thing I think she and Thorin fit really well. She and him have an understanding of each other. I also think he needs someone happy and carefree. He could be her rock. I feel like Thorin has the most potential to be with her over all the others.
Cionnfhaoladh chapter 10 . 4/27/2015
shishiwastaken chapter 10 . 4/27/2015
I feel like there were missing parts. Like, the orc mentions azog but you say he's actually there for her to see. And she said she fell off the horse but didn't she fall off the warg?
Cionnfhaoladh chapter 9 . 4/1/2015
I dont like... I EFFING LOVE!
Bitty-Girl chapter 8 . 3/1/2015
Love it I want to
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