|Reviews for A Date For Death|
| Guest chapter 58 . 11/7/2019
dick you bastard dog ending ending kek dick mending kaga do not make fanfic you bastard ending you cheap dick, the MC was Badas and strong so naive like this to the dick, oath regret
| bennibob chapter 5 . 8/18/2019
decent idea for a story, but the grammar is off just enough to through me out of the story. I might come back if I cant find anything else to read
| iamKshitij chapter 1 . 5/26/2019
This chapter is quite great but there's quite a big plot hole here, which is why does the sage of six paths seal the Jyuubi.
P.S.I love this fanfic.
| Ryu wolf chapter 62 . 1/17/2019
I didn’t like the alternate ending. I liked the first ending where everyone was brought back to life ( though I would have loved it if kushina was revived as well.
| geardagum chapter 5 . 1/13/2019
op naruto is best naruto
| assassin9707 chapter 14 . 11/8/2018
hmmm if naruto creates a lot of minerals that anyone can just pick up and sell wont that cause an inflation in this economy... this totally unrelated good story tho
| narutoxxxxxxball chapter 6 . 10/16/2018
| Greedward chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
What could I say? A stupid author with nice ideeas... he/zhe had to make it yaoi and evil because why not trash the great ideea?
I wouldn't read anything gay that some insane person finds it awesome.
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/4/2018
Should be Hyoton (ice) bloodline
| unconcernedfox chapter 13 . 7/8/2018
I'm liking the it so far, although I'm really cringing at zabuzas sword being able to cut through diamond. I suppose the sword could possibly have been made harder than diamond with some some sort of technique.
| Alexander chapter 23 . 12/31/2017
I just want to state now before I read any further that Naruto becoming a Jashinist makes no sense to me. He is in the process of becoming a powerful demon himself and I just can't see why he would consider worshipping another demon, even if he is stronger. It just seems like a silly and unreasonable addition to the story.
| Mistress Peverell chapter 20 . 11/6/2017
At the start of the chapter you say Naruto killed the Sound Team and then you make Shino fight Zaku? He's supposed to be dead! Grammar and spelling mistakes aren't that big of a problem but this is a huge oversight.
| Damien NightFall chapter 22 . 8/17/2017
... 1-2 3-4. How is it that sasuke is against gaara if he's number 5 when gaara is 4
| Marie JL chapter 38 . 7/1/2017
I think I will ask something stupid but in your story Hidan and Kakuzu are in love? at least if I have good understanding of one sentence of this chapter...
| AVIANVOID chapter 43 . 4/24/2017
Shinigami curb stomps Jubi