Reviews for The Christmas Assassination
notwritten chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
I like it. Keep smiling. :-)
Slightly so chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Excellent excellent!
Son of Whitebeard chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
interesting concept
JaneScarlett chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
YOU WROTE IT! (Sorry for the caps, been waiting anxiously since your lj post that you were thinking of this!)

Love your Mels. She's totally the wild personality we see in LKH, but the traces of River are already there. Calm in the face of shooting a sycorax. (And lol, boosting Jake's Ferrari. Again.)

'sauntering as if he owned the planet.' Yes, that's the Doctor alright. And her observation is really all the funnier bc one day, she will find that attitude charming... :)

And... aw. Her reminding him of Ace. She would.

'Well we can't very well let a dangerous alien run loose, can we?'
Lol! Not even a thought in his mind that she might be thinking the same thing about HIM.

Mels running up the building! and then dropping off the roof! And... err... The balcony. Great images. :)

Lol, wonder if he ever looks at River leaping off things and aiming a gun and the memories come back of the girl he met that day?

guess he does usually need touch, but its great, the idea that despite having telepathy, he couldn't read her thoughts. I'm sure Time Lords must've had some sort of fail-safes, so you couldn't go around reading each other.

And her latent memories, being trained to fly similar ships but unable to remember fully. Love that.

The last bit is so good! Mels playing up the innocent teenager shtick, the Doctor unobservant and the Tardis laughing...

And the last line had me giggling like mad. Absolutely loved this. Brilliant portrayal of Mels and the adventure fits perfectly; not AU at all. Just overall a fantastic story!
Bad Wolf and Timelords chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
XD lol awesome
10Blue10 chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Nice try, Mels.

Vworp on!