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![]() ![]() ![]() And I'm crying now. This is a lovely story. It tears at your heartstrings in the end, but it was beautifully placed together. You are one of the most amazing authors EVER. To all those reading the comments, this is definitely a story to read. It will make you laugh, cry, and want to facepalm, a lot. If you don't trust me, read for yourselves. |
![]() ![]() WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS IT HURTS but yesyesyesyesyes awesome 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was really sad. Poor 17. I wonder what happened to him. This was such a beautiful story. I love how Trunks spared 17's life. I love how when 17 kissed Trunks that Trunks smiled. I thought that was really sweet. I also love all the pranks that 17 played on Trunks, and also the snowball fight. I loved this story so much. Could you please write this story again, and write it from Trunks' pov? I'd love to know what he thought. 17 and Trunks are so cute together. I love this pairing. I love bottom Trunks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second time reading this...still so beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *clap, clap, clap, clap* wow person I don't even know *sniff* that was beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. It's one of a kind, and you portrayed Trunks and 17 perfectly. Every time I read this, I always end up crying at the end, even though I already know what's going to happen. It was a fantastic ending, though I do wish that you would've written this story again but from Trunks point of view, and also maybe wrote a one-shot about what happened to 17 afterwards. Other than that, this was awesome, and I'm glad I found this story. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() The tone for the story prepared the reader for the gloomy turns of events perfectly. ...I, um, cried. For real. *Wipes at a drying tear* But I so very much loved it. The whole italics thing, and where Juunana buried Trunks, was very dramatic and a creative addition to the story. I wonder where Juunana is now... I'm hoping, so hoping, you write another of this from Trunks' perspective. Like Juunana, his journal doesn't quite quench my curiosity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They kissed! Trunks smiled! EEEEEEP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, that scene where Juunana was having his idea of a fit because he doesn't know how to handle human emotions was enticing. Same goes for the cuddling in bed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the perfect excuse you conjured up to keep Trunks from slaughtering Juunana. Them being twins...I really never thought of it that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost thought you were going to have Juunana completely eradicate his sister from his mind. I'm hoping he returns to Trunks' soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought they were gonna kiss. -.o Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the greatest fics I've read yet:) These two are such rare pairing sadly, and yet they mold together quite well. I love how you came up with the idea of a picture...and 17 feeling curious about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story :) |