Reviews for Allons-y
marissa chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
i loved it, you should turn it into a story.
La Victime chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
3 3 3 3
ProudCanadianGal101 chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Me likey!
Nancy CuddleKitten Nickeson chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
I really liked this. Could you help me out with a tenth doctor fanfic?
Dead FanfictionDotNetAccount chapter 2 . 11/16/2013
Me: *Hugging the author's leg* please make more Doctor!

*Elsewhere During Space Time Continuem*

Lo: *Grabbed swimming head more as breaths grew shorter* /it even hurts to think/ *eyes watered as demeanour changed*

Doctour: *Turned to her concerned* what is wrong? *made to check her forehead*

Lo: *Shrunk back in seat with quivering lips while sniffling*

Ephraim: *Remorseful solemn eyes* it has begun

Doctour: *Briefly regarded him* what? *again tried to see why she's scared*

Lo: *Fell to floor in a low bow whilst speaking another language* ast elm mievos *tears hitting ground in torrents of water*

Ephraim: Usually our people die from the stings, but isn't so for Ms. Remnant *frowned*

Doctour: *Expression grew distressed* there must be something I can do *reached for girl* I won't harm you, I promise

Lo: *Hearts pounding out of synchronization* meno ni azcte fuloum *sobbing irregularly*

Doctour: *Whispered her tongue* aguro niene tu olgluos tientei bazure

Ephraim: *Features darkened* you must travel to the core of death itself

Lo: *Allowed him to rock me whilst clutching onto his trench coat- orbs watering faster*

Doctour: *Rubbing her back* I'll do anything *managed to pull up her sleeve with a gasp*

Lo: *Cried harder*

Ephraim: *Half flinched seeing huge swollen arm with blistering puss dripping bumps leaking hazy yellow green liquids* follow me then *briskly began walking to far end of hall*

Doctour: *Obliged while carrying female bridal style*

Lo: *Started screaming murder*

Doctour: *Begun singing a lullaby*

Hush, sleep in a bed of roses
The galaxies will always be welcome
To your soul made of tender, love, & care

As you wake, everything shall become clear
They will all rise to greet you fair
My lovely Time Lord Lady
Who confesses to keep all realms pure
Please stay well for kingdom calm
The Doctour is going to make you all better again
Never say R.I.P.

Lo: *Resting peacefully*

Ephraim: *Wiped stray tears & opened door leading towards a medical wing 'n storage room for base of operations*
Dead FanfictionDotNetAccount chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Me: I'm surprised you don't have more reviews. This story is impeccably (hope I used this word in the correct context) great *nods with Cheshire cat grin*
Avalanet chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Please update! :)
IsobelFrances chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
Just found this story and I really like it, please update soon!
The Yoshinator chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Oooooo! It's much more exciting not knowing what will occur in his travels. Please update soon.
DoctorBoo24 chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
It would have been nice to read lo saying goodbye to her family but was a good chapter. LOVE the story line, its very interesting. can't wait for chapter 3.
ronnieangell chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Are you turning this into a story? You should.
DoctorBoo24 chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Really enjoyed this chapter :-D well written and the story line was goood!
The Yoshinator chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I like this a lot! Please continue!