Reviews for Perry MasonTCOT Jilted Junior
Pam chapter 14 . 1/3
This is great I never know what is going to happen next. Great cliffhangers, wonderful Perry went from Lois to Della in one fell swoop I was stunned. Fabulous twists and turns.
Murphycat chapter 14 . 1/2
Nice to see a great new chapter up. I really enjoy this story.
Skysea chapter 14 . 1/2
It's a very good story but u have to much porn in it for me.
StateOfFranklin chapter 14 . 1/1
This is such a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
GratefullyDead chapter 14 . 1/1
Another brilliant chapter. Absolutely love the romance between Perry and Della. Perfectly suits them. It's sexy and sweet without being graphic or vulgar. I appreciate how you let us imagine how the scene unfolds and how the intimacy they share is revealed.
Great story-telling and a clever mystery. I am enthralled and waiting to find out more about Junior and his mom. Wonderful story.
PD4758PW chapter 14 . 1/1
LOL for Gertie! That Minnie sure is a character! Great phone conversation with Trey, too. Can't wait for more!
kaleen1212 chapter 1 . 1/1
Interaction between Della, Perry and Paul is just precious! And you kind of managed a cliff hanger there! Good story.
Jlk9506 chapter 14 . 1/1
Wow! Another great chapter! And what an ending! Still loving Minnie. Amazed at Della's patience but I like she sort of got to give a little back with trey! Keep 'em coming!
Gail chapter 14 . 1/1
Great chapter. I didn't see that coming. Zowie. The morning stuff was so lovely and real in a quiet way. I do enjoy Perry being jealous. From your profile I know you try and write what's plausible and that your first thought is their characterization. You really succeed. Not to say anything bad about anyone else (learned my lesson lol) but for me DP FF is no fun when the characters don't resemble the Della & Perry we know.
tengland2 chapter 14 . 1/1
Jr., has got those two wrapped so tightly around his finger. Least he is willing to stay with his father. Sleepovers seemed to have been the magic word. Poor Gertie, do feel a bit sorry for her. Minnie driving her crazy and Paul's grandmother. Very interesting and enjoyable chapter.
tengland2 chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
Nicely done, spice and all.
tengland2 chapter 12 . 12/28/2013
Interesting. Thought he was suppost to have gone home. Paul Jr., certainly will be in their lives for a very long time.
murphycat chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
I usually don't agree with 'guest' reviewers, but that was what confused me, too. He leaves with his arm around Lois, Edgar looks disappointed, and then he turns up all hot like he's done something bad and feeling guilty. Thanks for clarifying. I thought you meant what you thought you had made clear to you, but then I wondered if I had it right! Lol I hope that makes sense. And I sensed he was feeling neglected because of Junior, and men do stupid things, even to women they adore. BTW: hot scene. You are cooking with gas, baby! Can't wait til more!
DNPLC chapter 12 . 12/27/2013
Dear Guest...
(It's like Dear Friend from "The Shop Around the Corner," a favorite movie of mine.)

Well, I think I have to do a mea culpa here: everyone else did *not* get it so it may have been too ambiguous. Especially on Christmas (LOL) I would not want anyone to think that Perry would cheat on Della. In the past I have only done that to explain away what I feel are some stupid decisions on the part of the movies.
Perry was supposed to go running home to Della/Mommy and everyone, including Edgar, was supposed to have the wrong idea. And that's fine. But it should have been made to clear the reader, and obviously was not (my bad), that when he came home to her, that arousal was in anticipation of coming home to her, that he was contrite and totally unsullied.
Perhaps were I *ever* able to get my chapters up sooner (my *very* bad, I will endeavor to do better with that in 2014!) it would have been clear. But that's not good enough.
If, as a writer it had been my intent to make him a skunk, I would have said well, that's my choice-as I did when he cheated w/Laura 2-and readers were very understanding that that was a literary call made on an interpretation of a PM movie.
It was NOT my intent this time, I was not clear, and I thank you for calling me on it.
I'm just thrilled anyone is paying attention! LOL!
Speaking of which, thank you very much for your kind words about my writing. I LABOR on these so it means a lot.

Thanks you again for taking the time and interest to speak up. :)
D.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
Thank you DNPLC for personally responding. I did understand after reading chapter 13 that the spicy scene was between Perry and Della. However you left it ambiguous as to what had transpired between Perry and Lois prior to Perry returning to Della's apartment. The last we saw of Perry, he was leaving the bar arm in arm with Lois and apparently even Edgar the bartender was suspicious of Perry and Lois intentions. Then the next thing we know Perry ends up at Della's in a sexually aroused state - how did he get in that state before seeing Della? That is what I meant by questioning if Perry was screwing around with Lois, not necessarily sleeping with her, before going to Della's. You stated he was ashamed and even apologized to Della. Was that just because of his earlier behavior of shutting Della out or is there more to it?

You are an excellent writer and I enjoying reading your interesting works and how they all layer upon each other.
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