|Reviews for Tales from the Big Easy - New Orleans Lady|
| stormcallerbooks chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Thanks for pointing that out Blackbox. I updated that scene and hopefully now it conveys Bleu's combat experience but realative newness to the shadows.
| Blackbox chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
In the first part Bleu seems very new to the shadows, working out the little kinks and generally learning just what he’s signed up for. Something I found very likeable but makes the way he handles the crash just a tad too professional, almost casual.
Other then that I felt like this chapter was well paced and really built up many aspects of the story. The entire Zobop seemed well thought out, especially the little details of being attached to the pre-matrix life. Toward the end I found myself wondering what Bleu has been up to so hopefully you continue on this story )
Thanks for a good read!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
| agd888 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Brilliant so far