|Reviews for Naruto: Legends of Two Jinchuriki|
| nanox876 chapter 18 . 7/14
Just a few suggestions for future chapters:
There is a fanfic made by DiscoStu09 called "The Path of an Avenger" which you could borrow the idea for Sasuke's development. You could also have Naruto meet Shisui in his mindscape after Itachi plants Kotoamatsukami on him and have him steal the right eye from Danzo.
| Masterx01 chapter 19 . 7/13
Well, this was a nice ride while it last and i have to say it, good stuff have you here pal.
I really liked the characterization and the bonding scenes.
Just a little things that i dont like in the beginning but outside that this is good stuff.
I was feeling a little disapointed with the amount of fics in this site and the so low number of good ones between them(subjetive POV) but this fic and the Jinchuriki of the six path have hit the spot in my liking departament. I hope that there is another update soon...and that the JoTSP fic doesnt end with Naruto having a two way relationship with Fuu and Yugito. I hate the two way relationships and the poligamic endings, and the word 'harem' have little liking on my side.
| Masterx01 chapter 12 . 7/12
Man... i like this fic but in this chapter you over-extended with the ninja dance... i mean the ninja fight between the two jinchuriki and the abomination. The kicks, punchs and kunais are good and all but what is the use of launch thousands of them if you can blast your foe into oblivion with a jutsu? and im not taking about some overkill AoE, im taking about a jutsu that simply can do the work if you place it in the time and place. In this case how any times along that dance Naruto can put Arashi trought the meat grinder(aka the Rasengan) and he just continue kicking and punching? Then later he wondered what is need to take down this abomination... how about an odama rasengan in the face or faces? That surely would do the job with a overkill bonus or just make over a dozen of clones and mob him with rasengans, that also would made the job or that over-sized arm is troubling you? Them with dont put a piercing rasengan on it? i would like to see what's left of that arm after that. You dont wanna attacks involving the rasengan? How about making two dozen of clones, having the half of them henge into fuma shuriken, wind chakra coating them and then launch them to the abomination and see how the thing fares agains so many attacks from diferents angles?
Not that i dont like punch and kicks, no, what really i dont like is when a fight over-extend due the MC o someone else by some unknow reason preferd attack their oponent or oponents with every low-hitter in their arsenal (Many times) when they can put them down for good in seconds if they use some of their middle-heavy guns. If they has to conserve their energy for some reason or they cant pull out the heavy guns because some risk of leaking potentials weakness i can understand that. But when they extend the business for nothing, them i find all that 'fight' boring if not completly annoying and infuriating just by thinking ''The MC is like one or two levels above this guy and have some serius hitters so why he keep fighting and dont just use X attack to end this charade? This must have ended like 3 wall texts ago!''
Between two evenly fighters the whole charade of low-level hitters have its propurse of making openings and whatnot, but between a someone more or less powerful vs a next to nobody mid-lvl boss character of turn... No, its just annoying.
| Left Sock chapter 19 . 7/9
omg i serioysly cant stop rereading this. This is true art right here please make more
| Left Sock chapter 1 . 7/9
Ok listen dude honestly look at everyones comments you just have to come back to this story i really really like this wayyyyy to much guess you could say i actually really really love this i find myself wishing this was how the actual anime turned out to be i feel naruto and fuu should have been together in the anime and gotten married i love this story youve wrote and so do alot of other people please continue this absolutley amazing story of our favorite lovers
| Seth thurman chapter 19 . 7/9
Omg what happens next please i beg you to write more
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/7
This is so good. Please finish
| jburk40 chapter 19 . 7/5
Update? Or abandoned?
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 19 . 6/22
Oh, and enjoyed the Fu funny scenes in chapter 18 too. Good finish up to Fu's romantic epiphany with her chasing the masochist Jiraiya
Now the action is heating up!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 18 . 6/22
The whole detail about someone being able to summon Kurama in hindsight should have given pause to thoughts of a Uchiha conspiracy, because it is doubtful they would have been able to hide someone that powerful from within the village itself. That detail on the summoning gets overlooked, thanks!
Nice twist having more Akatsuki by accident earlier on
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 17 . 6/19
What I really like here in this fic is how you have shown Naruto's maturity. That was a serious problem with the canon timeskip since it seemed like only his body and fighting skills (a little) had grown, not his intelligence nor maturity.
Having Naruto call Jiraiya by his actual name at the end was a good touch
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 6/18
LOL for the "Get it off!"
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 6/15
Very original idea here with the book writing, and very enjoyable
Man your Fu is going to be a powerhouse!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 6/15
Enjoyed all this fun and bonding, thank you! Also appreciate laying out Naruto's thoughts on Sakura
LOL Fu and finder's fee!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 6/14
Thank you for giving a decent argument on why Naruto believes he can save Sasuke, makes his actions more believable. Then you followed it up with an even better argument on why Sasuke had gone too far, with the best part being "what if it had been someone else besides Naruto to fight Sasuke?"
...the image of Orochimaru visiting his parents grave regularly somehow puts him in a different light, also the crying over Dan