Reviews for The Angel of Persia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Erik’s outburst was definitely Erik like so good on that! I like the sense of softness that you have given his character and the sense a humanity that you’ve bestowed upon him. I also love the reason of why he hates pity. I truly haven’t seen a story do that kind of reason and I love it! It’s definitely an understandable reason and it gives us the perfect amount of insight into his past as a child. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So nervous to see what this misunderstanding turns into ah! An amazing chapter and amazing story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter! I like eriks character just the way it is! I feel like it’s the perfect amount of attitude. Plus, the question of eriks mask being a trap was a very good add in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yet another wonderful story! I love how you write each character and have such a good balance between character growth and plot, yet without being overly tense or stressful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy Erik is a ninny. I fee for Nadir having to support him when he could just talk to her. But is like we’re getting two stories in one- one in Persia, then the usual Paris one. Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I apologize for not reviewing every chapter, but it was really your fault for writing such a good story, I simply couldn’t stop long enough between each chapter, as much as I had a lot to say! This story is nothing short of magnificent. The storytelling, the plot twists, the characters, the feelings, everything. It’s on my top 5 fav phics ever for sure. Thank you so much for sharing it, you’re a truly great writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this very much. all the emotions of the characters were displayed in a way that was easy for me to connect to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. It was lovely of them to announce to the police officer that Erick owned ther opera house! that helped things along nicely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, their new last name is quite fitting :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes me likey :) oh dear the misunderstandings are just horrible! but like good at the same time? idk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how he slid down the rope thingy to get to the stage! that would indeed have been quite a shock to see your dead husband standing there! oooh I'm so excited for the talk! |
![]() ![]() ![]() kjsdvjdnvbdnlosabkjdnhpoooodkjfdbjkadsvb! OMG I'm so excited! dude I freaked out for a WHILE when he read that he had a son! ooowheeeee! omg. I am incredibly emotionally invested in this story. i cant stop smiling! yay! I'm going to explode!... I hope thats not true. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ergm! Ellos son muy cerca! Oye! Pacientes mellybell04! They are very close! Hey! Patience mellybell04! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh! I thought it was real! How could you! jk. I enjoyed it thoroughly :) aw Charles is so cute! eeeeee! what is Erick going to think?! for he simply must find out at one point :) |