Reviews for The Angel of Persia
Melissastallings chapter 9 . 11/12/2020
Erik’s outburst was definitely Erik like so good on that! I like the sense of softness that you have given his character and the sense a humanity that you’ve bestowed upon him. I also love the reason of why he hates pity. I truly haven’t seen a story do that kind of reason and I love it! It’s definitely an understandable reason and it gives us the perfect amount of insight into his past as a child. Great chapter!
Melissastallings chapter 6 . 11/11/2020
So nervous to see what this misunderstanding turns into ah! An amazing chapter and amazing story so far
Melissastallings chapter 4 . 11/11/2020
Amazing chapter! I like eriks character just the way it is! I feel like it’s the perfect amount of attitude. Plus, the question of eriks mask being a trap was a very good add in.
13teddies13 chapter 53 . 11/9/2020
Yet another wonderful story! I love how you write each character and have such a good balance between character growth and plot, yet without being overly tense or stressful.
13teddies13 chapter 35 . 11/5/2020
Oh boy Erik is a ninny. I fee for Nadir having to support him when he could just talk to her. But is like we’re getting two stories in one- one in Persia, then the usual Paris one. Yay!
toscanamarcela chapter 53 . 10/13/2020
First of all, I apologize for not reviewing every chapter, but it was really your fault for writing such a good story, I simply couldn’t stop long enough between each chapter, as much as I had a lot to say!
This story is nothing short of magnificent. The storytelling, the plot twists, the characters, the feelings, everything. It’s on my top 5 fav phics ever for sure. Thank you so much for sharing it, you’re a truly great writer.
mellybell04 chapter 52 . 9/4/2020
I enjoyed this very much. all the emotions of the characters were displayed in a way that was easy for me to connect to.
mellybell04 chapter 51 . 9/4/2020
lol. It was lovely of them to announce to the police officer that Erick owned ther opera house! that helped things along nicely.
mellybell04 chapter 50 . 9/4/2020
yes, their new last name is quite fitting :)
mellybell04 chapter 49 . 9/4/2020
it was perfect!
mellybell04 chapter 48 . 9/3/2020
yes me likey :) oh dear the misunderstandings are just horrible! but like good at the same time? idk.
mellybell04 chapter 47 . 9/3/2020
I love how he slid down the rope thingy to get to the stage! that would indeed have been quite a shock to see your dead husband standing there! oooh I'm so excited for the talk!
mellybell04 chapter 46 . 9/3/2020
kjsdvjdnvbdnlosabkjdnhpoooodkjfdbjkadsvb! OMG I'm so excited! dude I freaked out for a WHILE when he read that he had a son! ooowheeeee! omg. I am incredibly emotionally invested in this story. i cant stop smiling! yay! I'm going to explode!... I hope thats not true.
mellybell04 chapter 44 . 9/3/2020
ergm! Ellos son muy cerca! Oye! Pacientes mellybell04! They are very close! Hey! Patience mellybell04!
mellybell04 chapter 43 . 9/3/2020
ugh! I thought it was real! How could you! jk. I enjoyed it thoroughly :) aw Charles is so cute! eeeeee! what is Erick going to think?! for he simply must find out at one point :)
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