Reviews for The Angel of Persia
mellybell04 chapter 42 . 9/3/2020
Nadir's costume was awesome XD. lol, Christine is indeed bright when it comes to getting a fellow to say something particular. I really like that you put the rose back in there!
mellybell04 chapter 41 . 9/3/2020
haha! that was great when he scared Meg, hehehe. hmmm, I am excited about the ball! I love the Grand March, Virginia Reel, and Chasing the Fox... or it might be foxtrot, maybe both mean the same thing... this year's masquerade got cancelled! :(
mellybell04 chapter 39 . 9/3/2020
oh my goodness! The picture of Erick with Charles on his lap at the piano was PRECIOUS! I literally was trying not to cry cuz I have mascara on. oooh I hope she does suspect!
mellybell04 chapter 37 . 9/2/2020
I like Raoul very much... too bad it's all complicated. *facepalm* I'm going to bed!
mellybell04 chapter 36 . 9/2/2020
ugh! mmmg wow. that was really heartbreaking to read; meaning very well done, sincerely heartwrenching!
mellybell04 chapter 33 . 9/2/2020
omg she has a baby! WWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOO! hallelujah! you're in for a suprise Erick!
mellybell04 chapter 32 . 9/2/2020
I like the tunnel thing and the paintings. omg! Christine is there!
mellybell04 chapter 31 . 9/2/2020
they both think the other is dead... well.
mellybell04 chapter 30 . 9/2/2020
the Shanabu is very smart but she uses her intelligence in the worst ways possible. aren't we readers lucky? we know she's alive! poor Erick. well when he finds out she is alive his joy may be all the greater :)
mellybell04 chapter 29 . 9/2/2020
who is in the shadows? is he a new guy, maybe a girl? or someone we've introduced to before? OOOO excitement! I am enjoying this very much :)
mellybell04 chapter 28 . 9/2/2020
oh no! ok he's coming! ...the Shanabu told her his past!, no! ...oh good she escaped, whew! ...oh no he's drugged! ...no, don't go to him, Christine!... AAAAAAHHHHHHHH he's choking her! OMG, *screams very loud* holy my! dang my emotions be flying! gosh, woman!
I mean... t'was indeed a very exciting chapter. lots of twists and drama.
mellybell04 chapter 27 . 9/2/2020
oh, dear! time for some action! hehehe :)
mellybell04 chapter 26 . 9/1/2020
plot twist approaching?!
mellybell04 chapter 24 . 9/1/2020
ugh, poor guy. the voices in his head need to stop tormenting him so!
mellybell04 chapter 23 . 9/1/2020
well im glad the got to at least finish the ceremony. lol. hm, what shall befall them next?
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