Reviews for The Angel of Persia
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 24 . 4/29/2024
Sweet and seductive, and smutty too!
AWESOME
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 23 . 4/28/2024
What a beautiful ceremony. I loved the questions asked and the answers given. A sweet custom with the honey! Than you for researching this and sharing it with us!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 22 . 4/28/2024
There is only one word to describe this:
perfect
Perfect
PERFECT
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 21 . 4/28/2024
It was perfect, both so desirous but unsure at the same time. I love how they are talking and being honest with each other...like when Erik told her she could stop him now, but in a few minutes he probably wouldn't even hear her.
I for one am glad that ANYTHING stopped them from going further. Married sex is THE hottest sex!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 20 . 4/27/2024
Ooooo, she loves him and she knows it... perfect!
Now SHE is the one in helll... love it...
Now what is she up to...I think I know but I will have to wait and see!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 19 . 4/27/2024
Beautiful and poignant! Loved her singing him to sleep!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 18 . 4/27/2024
WOW... wonderfully written! They NEED to get out of Persia!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 17 . 4/27/2024
Would marrying her cause the others to leave her alone?
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 16 . 4/27/2024
We should have known her curiosity was going to unleash the swarm, yet, for her own protection she needs to know exactly how things stand should she leave Erik's protection.
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 15 . 4/26/2024
I did indeed read the story first and I agree with Christine...I prefer happy endings!

"She had once again reached in with her slender hands and gripped his heart like a vice. How did she have the power to crush him with mere words?"...she will hold it so gently, yet fiercely if anyone should try to take it from her!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 14 . 4/26/2024
I adore Erik's interactions with Nadir and Christine...I also loved how he handled the "prince" (who is not very princely!)

However is she going to take the news of what the "prince" actually asked Erik. Would he be able to do anything to Christine if she was Erik's wife? Would the Shah?
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 13 . 4/26/2024
"For it was painfully clear that Erik was now treating her life a predatory animal protecting his mate."
"Suddenly, a surge of jealousy surged through her and she knew that if that witch ever tried to seduce Erik...she was going to have a fight on her hands."...oh, no, now there are two mate protecting animals on the loose!

"Christine was his soul mate, in every way possible."...glad he sees it this soon...just hope he does not ruin it!

This is getting kind of scary when someone wants what Erik has...he does not share AT ALL!
And in the case of Christine, he should not! I see an appearance of our favorite Phantom on the near horizon!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 12 . 4/26/2024
So glad she shared her heart with him...they were made for each other by GOD Himself...I love it.

Sweet about her actions with the children and that Erik was not angry.

Love the interaction with Nadir as well.

Brava, my dear!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 11 . 4/25/2024
A mutual interest in books and music...and an obvious interest in each other. Too bad they seem to keep their thoughts to themselves...but where would the angst be if they did not?
Loved how they discussed using the right bait to bring about trust!
forgiven4ever1974 chapter 10 . 4/25/2024
I loved the Leroux quote that Nadir shared with Erik since Erik said it in the book. I hope Christine ends up coaxing Ayesha as her companion in the feline category. Though it is obvious that the sleeping tiger adores her already!
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