| Reviews for The Angel of Persia |
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   forgiven4ever1974 chapter 9 . 4/25/2024 A perfect apology! Erik actually has a friend! Can't wait to see what fun Christine and Nadir have! |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 8 . 4/25/2024 Exciting and intimate...doesn't get much better than that! "Pity, that damnable emotion that brought him to his knees and made him feel weak and powerless. Pity was an emotion given to one who was a victim, one who was helpless, and Erik was anything but helpless. Not any more...and never again!"...what a perfect definition of pity. And our poor Erik has no idea what compassion is! Such a shame! "No compassion anywhere!" ""The world showed no compassion to me!" (Libretto from Phantom of the Opera)...it just breaks your heart about Erik... |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 7 . 4/24/2024 Lovely interaction... talking things out! That boy cannot stay out of hell! |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 6 . 4/24/2024 A harem for pity sake...Erik what WERE you thinking? Aren't Erik and Christine the king and queen of misunderstandings? |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 5 . 4/23/2024 Oh my word...he counted how many sips until she finished her tea ..just a little obsessive huh Erik? "Discomfort did not even begin to describe his current condition"...just wait Erik, I'm sure your "stenographer" will be making it even worse and id bet sooner rather than later! If this is hell imagine a deeper circle of it! He-he! |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 4 . 4/22/2024 Dark yes, but not darkness...He did it THIS time for her. He must be as good an actor as Christine is an actress to have thrown Nadir for such a loop! |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 3 . 4/22/2024 What awful "morals" from the leaders of the country! Cannot wait for her performance! |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 2 . 4/22/2024 I love how she was so eager to know his name! I can already see them starting to fall in love! |
| forgiven4ever1974 chapter 1 . 4/22/2024 Once again I have fallen under the spell of your story. Finally he has been chosen! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/19/2024 Man of La Mancha, 1965. Um. |
| Primadonna91 chapter 14 . 5/16/2023 Seems like if Christine was battling her lustful thoughts she might have had a little more reaction to his spanking comment. And oh, the groveling at her feet. That was positively swoon worthy. |
| Primadonna91 chapter 7 . 5/16/2023 I know I am late to this, but I’m really enjoying the Persia location. It is something a bit different than the norm. I think Erik might very well have enjoyed a foot bath. He has never had anyone show him love and caring. I think he would soak up those experiences just as much as the touches. |
| TheCurseOfCapistrano chapter 53 . 4/10/2023 This is such a magnificent story! A real masterpiece! I love your writing style, I was really transported in your story. And i really enjoy that Erik finally has his happy ending, it is truly heartwarming. I hope you keep on wrinting, you have a great talent here! |
| Trying Not To Love You chapter 11 . 3/8/2023 Eee! I’m so freaking happy rn! I’m loving this! |
| sharletqueen909 chapter 53 . 10/24/2022 Beautiful story, beautiful characters… amazing! |