Feelings of one's to the deceased.
Yesterday Went Too Soon. Yea, I remember reading Catching Fire and feeling that Day One went too fast. Of course, I'm a fast reader, then again I did get caught (slowed down) a lot reading CF.
Pleasant chapter, Gamemaker97. Pleasant indeed.

I really liked how you chose this scene, as it eas very interesting to read and hear what one victor thought about the others. Good chapter!

This was great! I liked how he thought of the dead, their choices being a victor! I cant wait for more!

ps sorry I didn't review the last chapter, but I really did enjoy it! :D

Poor Mags!:( I liked it how you included some background info for Finnick's Games and how she felt as a mentor. :)

first of all-you're doing Katniss too? YAY for that :)
second of all-kudos on the hitchcockian flavour of these games. very well done!

I love it! very well written and very insightful. i love his musing on the purpose of the games and how you've hinted at the animosity in the districts. great job!

hmmm...i always imagined once somebody turns eighteen they would be out of the reaping. one of your best chapters ;)

very well done! congrats QuietConspiracy:)
i like the countdown and the way you used the song in your writting :) also i'm looking forward to reading the other entries.

i liked Robin and now i like his brother too!

spoiler! :D but still loved this chapter!

I loved 'second time unlucky'. Ludo is great!

i like your Finnick-he's ver believable

funny how his sister volunteered so that they wouldn't have to compete against eachother and he can only think about how to be better than her ;)

I think you portrayed her just right- cold and calculating

"glorified execution" great choice of words. this is very realistic behaviour from the Gamemakers considering last year's fiasco.
Also, perfect ending- i love the irony, that she won without having to kill anyone -which is kind of the point of the Games. great job once again!