Reviews for 75 Games, 75 Victors, 75 Oneshots
PrincessLyoka chapter 51 . 9/16/2013
Princess Unikitty chapter 88 . 9/15/2013
not bad, mjelliot, not bad. nice use of detail. the end was a bit confusing... why is toby happy that he hasn't died when the fog's probably fucked him up beyond belief?
MJElliot chapter 87 . 9/15/2013
i like introspective chapters. they just show you are a well rounded writter-you show creativity in comming up with an amazing array of arenas and situations but also sensitivity and insight through the way you build your characters and deliver their thoughts.
hats off to you!
PS: although the whole story is a tribute to the Games I feel this chapter is a tribute in itself to a special few :) well done!
MJElliot chapter 86 . 9/15/2013
just perfect. I don' t know how you keep track of all the litle details -like the one about Auriel becoming disturbed...and Mags is extremely well written, very age well done!
MJElliot chapter 85 . 9/15/2013
she's very Career like, always thinking about strategy. i would have like to learn more about what 'ruined' her before the Games. i think developing on the personal details of each tribute really helps paint a more complete picture.
you can see the difference from her victory year-she feels cery grown up. you did a great job writting her and her transformation.
MJElliot chapter 84 . 9/15/2013
you've included Peeta! you're the best. :) though I am quite interested in what he was thinking when he hit the force field
MJElliot chapter 83 . 9/14/2013
one of your best.
i loved her thoughts on the litle boyshe killed and the choice she made atthe end.
also i fi d it refreshing that she manages to look at the Games from the Capitol's done
MJElliot chapter 82 . 9/14/2013
i really like the way youwrote the ending-great choice of words ;) and also that he wants to protect Beetee; he really is morethen "sound of mind"
MJElliot chapter 81 . 9/14/2013
very optimistic of him to believe hecould take somebody down,must be the morfling...good description of his addiction, though i would have expected his side effects to be more severe
MJElliot chapter 80 . 9/14/2013
"a nation so sadistic and corrupt"-very well put!
MJElliot chapter 79 . 9/14/2013
i like that Toby keeps popping up;) and "Career infested island'- awesome choice of words
MJElliot chapter 78 . 9/14/2013
nicely good ending and overall death scene
MJElliot chapter 77 . 9/14/2013
poor Luke:( i like how you described his relationship to his other tributes and his life in the District. also i thought it funny to count Peeta among the heavyweight players, him being so nice and all
MJElliot chapter 75 . 9/14/2013
very nice. she does not ramble. i think her thoughts are very legitimate-how murder will change her, appreciating life in the District, how people would fare without her...very well done!
MJElliot chapter 74 . 9/14/2013
oh i just love Peeta-whish you could write more in his POV
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