I love the fact that you mixed the historical story of Esther with the world of Middle Earth. And the Orcs being included is definitely intriguing! But, I have to say, I am not at all for the male-x-male stuff. I miss the days when you could say “gay” and just mean happy. I hate how the world has clouded a words original meaning. Especially when God took such care in words. . .

Thorin is going to choose a “queen” out of 3 males and 1 female? I feel a disturbance in the force. The definition of a queen is a woman soveirn. Maybe you should define what a woman is. I’m going to check out now, lol. Bye!

I think I might have just thrown up in my mouth In what sort of sick world do you live in where you think a male orc would be a good shag? And having Thorin consider picking a male orc as queen? Are you mentally ill? They have putrid smelling slime on their skin, have faces that only a mother could love (In their cases, not even a mother would love them. Which is why they are dug up instead of born) and have you seen their hair or teeth? They eat meat, and don’t brush their teeth. If the foul slime won’t make you gag then their breath will. Ew.

I truly loved this story! Mixing one of my favorite Bible stories with The Hobbit. I was surprised that the Orcs had been considered for Consort, the thought of Thorin and Bolg together was not a pleasant idea. I liked how you developed the story, very unique and beautiful story! As a Messianic Jew (believer in Jesus/Yeshua) and avid fan of fantasy (Tolkien, CS Lewis, etc.) well done! I’ll now check to see if you have any sequels to enjoy reading. Thanks!

I have tears in my eyes of emotion right now.

This fanfic is so original, I love it and I can't wait to see how it plays out!

AAAAAHH MY HEART YOU’VE GONE AND TURNED IT INTO A GOOEY PUDDLE ON THE FLOOR!
I didn’t know I needed this BRILLIANT AU until I read this and I am absolutely awestruck. Your writing is AMAZING and absolutely beautiful! The plot is perfectly crafted perfection and very entertaining!
Perfect. Just. Perfect.

First review after binge reading;

Very AU, but incredibly enjoyable _ your imagination and effort put into this is wonderful. Thank you for sharing 3

excellent soundtrack choice. I do the same.

Enjoying the reread. Hope you and yours are safe and well during Covid Quarantine.

What did Smaug become after this ? Yes, I loved your story, it was fabulous ! But what about Smaug ? I'm so curious about this !

Might this happen to be based on the Veggie tales version of Esther?

I am a French reader, and I always prefer English fanfictions. I really enjoyed your story. It is so fresh and adorable. Billa is at first common, but this is a life adventure for her.
I really like the idea of competition for a royal wedding. Can I take it from the beginning of a story of mine? It is not a fanfic, and it will be very different, but I wanted to ask you first. I hope I get an answer from you!

It's all so perfect! Thank you, this read was genius!

Eeeeeeek! So exited!