Reviews for Legacy
Baconfat chapter 21 . 2/22/2003
Ahh, I've missed being able to keep up on this. Fine, fine work magistrate. The duel was a masterwork - and the way you /almost/ think Squall's the one who's going to get badly hurt - boom! Wow. Poor Squall. so many emotional issues that he just can't seem to escape. Very interesting parallels between Aya and Seifer. Yay, I say, for the likeability of Tiamat, even though I can't really say that I know what the dragon's up to. Anyways, I'm really enjoying this. And can't think of anything to say, because a contented sigh doesn't translate well into review form. Great ending for part one, and I'm /really/ looking forward to the next parts. *applause*
Baconfat chapter 18 . 2/22/2003
[".you look like you got into a fight with your comb and it won't speak to you any more."]

Oh man that cracked me up. A Lunar Cry? This is /nuts/! What have these kids gotten themselves into.? Great chapter. Loved the dialogue, and as always, I must feel sorry for Kam. Very neat work, pulling the whole chapter from Aya's unfortunate POV.
Kuroneko chapter 21 . 1/25/2003
I'll try to only leave one review this time; sorry about the extra five from last time. I was having trouble with the submit button. ;) On to reviewing!

Once again I'm left unsure of who I pity more - this time, the debate is raging between Kamalyn and Squall. Loved the conversation between Squall and Tiamat, and Tiamat's name for Squall. And Rinoa being stern and commanding? SHOCK! ;D
MaddMax chapter 21 . 1/21/2003
I love your writing. The dialogue, the descriptions, the plot, and the emotions are all perfect...I wish, I wish I could write so easily like you can!
Quycksylver chapter 21 . 1/21/2003
Great chapter. Gotta admit, Aya sure has guts - to leave everything and everyone behind like that.

Sorry I haven't been reviewing much lately...just get tired of having nothing to say except...er...great chapter. heh.

Q
AtheneMiranda chapter 20 . 1/20/2003
Hm, why did I not see this? ::insane inane jealousy! ;) :: Anyway, is...most weird and scary. The fight was written beautifully and I L
Kuroneko chapter 20 . 1/19/2003
Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.
Kuroneko chapter 20 . 1/19/2003
Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.
Kuroneko chapter 20 . 1/19/2003
Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.
Kuroneko chapter 20 . 1/19/2003
Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.
Kuroneko chapter 20 . 1/19/2003
Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.
Kuroneko chapter 20 . 1/19/2003
Hee. I finally got around to reading this; I'd been meaning to for quite awhile. That was an awesome fight, and Squall's question, "What did the note say?" was great. Not sure who I ought to feel more sorry for, Squall or Aya. ...Or Kamalyn. ;D

Quistis' appearance was great, catching the mighty SeeD Commander Leonhart fighting after curfew and berating the both of them as if they were little kids.
Prodigy chapter 18 . 12/8/2002
Yet another in depth descrptive story! Thats what I like, another great story. Keep it up!

Prodigy
Shootinstar chapter 18 . 12/5/2002
Kamalyn describing events - really excellent idea. Nice one. *crosses fingers that Aya'll start tlking properly soon, (goshdarnit), and eagerly awaits next chapter*
Amber Tinted chapter 17 . 11/26/2002
i love this story so original so cute! Love it love it love it mah haha
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