Reviews for Venomous
xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 6 . 4/8/2013
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It is so sad! Did she die? Did she get to see her mate again?!
I like it. I really do, even though it's really sad and all.
Keep writing,
I'm not going to say any more 'cos its just to awesome ;)
meow chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
aww, i like serpent! kept going! meow
xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
That's really creepy… has she gone insane? How did she manage to kill three cats without realising?
I love this story. It awesome.
Poor little dead to-be.
leviastiel chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
That was so creepy... I loved it!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
You sick badger spawn Spider
meow chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
So, She attacked the tribe cat, then was attacked by the other tribe cats, OR she was attacked by the tibe she-cat. I like this story its from the point of an evil cat. meow
Snowblossom0904 chapter 4 . 3/20/2013
AWESOME. What happened? Did she die? Did she pass out? Did a Tribe cat attack her? What happened?
xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
What happened? Oh my goodness this story is awesome.
Keep writing it,
meow chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
aww, i hoped she'd kill all the clans, one by one... meow love de story!
Blucatz chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Very interesting, i like it so far. my story is Warriors:born to Live and Reign, Destiny Begins I would love for your to read it!
Snowblossom0904 chapter 3 . 3/12/2013


xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
Oh. My. Goodness.
Beautiful. Wonderful. Moving.

That was AWESOME! I liked Serpent, and I couldn't figure out that Serpwnt was a she-cat until. The end of Chapter 1. I am really, really amazed that words like that could slide out of the pen of a mortal.
That was awesome. Romance, death, sadness... I love Serpent. Poor Serpent.

I loved it.

Keep writing,
Snowblossom0904 chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
Oh no! Poor, poor Serpent. Now I feel bad for her. Serpent shall give Spider a slow, painful, agonizing death. Muahahahhahaha!

Can Serpent be pregnant? She-cats can still have kits even if the father is long dead.
HolyRomanVixen chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I love the twist at the end. Can't wait for next update
OnceInABlueSun chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Wow...just-wow this is amazing!
Update very soon (:
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