i shall wait for a next part of this great history

igris is that you

my head hurts reading this shit

just curious, how does he play tf2, without internet? does he just do practice mode?

this story is so cringe lol, especially shikamaru’s “analysis”

i guess its true a character is only as smart as the author

Naruto should have pain tolerance from padt torture

I don't know how I feel about this story. on one hand I kind of like it but on the other hand I don't like how Sasuke is being portrayed. I don't even know if I like how Naruto is being portrayed either. I just feel like this is unnecessary drama instead of just furthering and telling the story

yea India wait i am Indian

I kinda hate that you didn't let naruto and Iruka bond here :(

Absolutely amazing

The speed thing is bullshit... I know this isn't canon but it has been said so many times that it has become stupid, Naruto in canon never actually ran from ANBU and what not, maybe so chunnin but they never took it seriously, I mean do you really think the ninja didn't notice Naruto drawing the whole Hokage mountain? They let him do it due to his status and knowing that he will have to fix it later. How in the hell would a child who never applied himself with his shorter legs and shit chakra manipulation ever be faster than jounins?

The beginning was wonky at best, but this... This is absolutely fucked up, and for some reason I'm loving every second of it.

must be strong to get through on paper barrier LOL

My family came from the Plantagenet line. It's always intriguing reading fiction with said family and others I'm part of.

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