I am having a hard time with this fic lol. Let me say this: your writing is actually decent and you have an interesting and relatively unique plot line. You also have given interesting changes to the various canon characters.

Mobile Users: Spoilers likely, don’t read on.

However, I am having a hard time accepting the introduction of your various “invader” characters. Most of the introductions revolve around surprising large name characters like Hanzo or Jiraiya and those two work fine; Hanzo’s village (in my opinion at least) does not have the same level of protections that other hidden villages do. The infiltration of Konoha and the invasion of Kumo, on the other hand, seems way too outlandish to me.

Let me preface with this assumption, these individuals, the Hanzo, do not appear to have the ability to use ninjutsu and so likely do not have nor know a way to properly interface with a barrier ninjutsu.

Konoha has a detection barrier that notifies the Konoha Barrier Corps when there has been an intruder. To me, you are spinning a pretty tall tale in saying not one, but two individuals were able to infiltrate Konoha without raising the alarm, let alone the fact that the first one directly attacked the Konoha Jinchuriki. Hiruzen would’ve taken action over that defense breach, let alone what Danzo would have done. It has been indicated that Kumo also has a barrier Corp, so the intrusion of three individuals seems like a tall tale as well. (B is kept by or in Kumo from what I recall of Canon, if the three met B outside of Kumogakure, then the above point is moot)

If they somehow do have the intelligence to bypass “current” barrier ninjutsu in effect, then great. But it still begs the question of how the 2nd infiltration of Konoha would have occurred without detection after a direct attack on their jinchuriki occurred.

The other part of these Hanzo that I am having a problem with is their power levels. Your statement of their power levels i have no issue with; soldiers are likely below Jonin, Lieutenants are jonin at least, Kings are kage, and who knows what the emperor is. What I have a problem with is how you are implying that many different kage or so shinobi like Jiraiya or B were able to be injured by a small team of three or so Lieutenants. It makes your previous statements about their power levels seem incorrect.

A small team of jonin would not be able to injure either Jiraiya or B, if that was possible they would’ve been easily dealt with during wars. If you said a team of 20 or so went after them, being actual jonin Level, I would agree that merits them being injured. But if only three are needed to inflict such damage on these kinds of shinobi, I would hypothesize that “Hanzo” could crush two of the major hidden villages now (not including Suna or Kiri cuz they are really weak at this time in Naruto canon). They already have 547 individuals who can, in teams of three, at least occupy a Kage Enemy. Beating a hidden village with those 500 or so and the 5 Kings doesn’t seem out of the realm of possibility at all.

I am not even going to account for guns in all this talk of power levels; in the manga the land of waves had a merchant who had a gun under the counter. A poor merchant had a weapon that in your story could kill a shinobi. It begs question of why shinobi don’t use guns 1, and 2 what you consider shinobi reaction times to be. Of course, this wasn’t directly addressed in canon so I digress. If you have an explanation for all I brought up, then cool. If not, then oh well, plot things. I’ll probably keep reading either way.

I hope you don’t take offense to any of this, I am enjoying the read, it’s just hard at certain points for me.

Y’know, I just got this weird feeling... that maybe we’re gonna have an OP boi on our hands here... i don’t know, it’s just a hunch...

*fave and follow*

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

I don't think you thought this through, naruto is doing jutsu as if his control wasn't shitty, doesn't matter how much chakra you have if you can't actually form anything with it and I'm pretty sure a jutsu like warlords aura should need a high level of control. Another thing is naruto's wisdom which is 0, he should be an idiot and imperceptive of his surroundings or of others and how they feel, cos wisdom is 0. Wisdom is putting information to use and Perception comes under wisdom, with how naruto is at 0, he should literally be canon naruto, being an idiot and headstrong. Your story doesn't reflect this at all, naruto is like an edgelord just cos of literally one thing the hokage said which is basically a bad representation of who naruto is, actually naruto was kinda edgy from the beginning and i can't help but feel you made him like that in your image which is a mistake on your part, i came in reading expecting a lot better than what was given, got my own hopes up to see it come crashing. Naruto is an edge lord, sasuke has a weak character on the level of a 5 yr old looking at his hero in the flesh and kakashi is slow witted. The only character you got close to right was sakura and that's because she basically said the same things as the canon sakura did. Much disappointment, might not bother with re:gamer

I'd rather hide the gamer power instead of having people know, it breeds jealousy and makes people interested in your biology, pretty bad stuff in a rather fatalistic world

Wow just a random thought, what if his stats sheet had Namikaze as his middle name, spoilerrrrrsss

Literally 0 wisdom hahaha so wrong, it should be 1, he knows ramen is the best food in the world at least yoooo

Wow. Damn. So Naruto should be knowing the Edo Tensei now right?

Surprisingly enough the power scaling in this fic isn't that absurd. earlier in the chapter the queen is stated to be around the strength of madara or hashirama. That means that 4th shinobi war naruto is stronger than the queen. and that the old man is only around twice as strong as kaguya. not all that much considering all of those cosmic horror vibes I've been getting from him.

Well RIP Jiriya

Naruto saying "nara-san" almost made me droop this story. Wtf. They are friends. But okay let's continue.

Story went into the fucking trash. Bad choices author.

I absolutely love this story, I hope you continue this, even thought it's been quite a long time since you last updated

god I love the traps and the achievement caught snake in a bear trap lol

Hope you update again one day.