Reviews for Born To Be a Legend
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 3/23
Cool story continue please.
jake chapter 7 . 9/15/2014
why not add Rias and Sayuri as well
Cerulean Knight chapter 7 . 5/29/2014
I can only guess that the assassin that was using Orochimaru's name was Naruto and that he was that shadowed figure as well. Although I'm a tad confused as to what's going on. Besides the wave arc that is.
Hana Scarecrow chapter 7 . 4/11/2014
Kyaaa amazing story :) i love the pairing, kakashi and yugao.. It really sweet :)
I also love the way you describe their children, it's amazing! :D
I'd love to see what's on the next chapter, please update! :)
The Awesome Being chapter 7 . 1/25/2014
Duuuude mention naruto already c'mon ... i wanna see him and mira ... i mean i like erza but THEY are the main characters...THEY deserve the attention spot .. also how come you didn't mention mira's beauty and you mentioned erza's c'mon in the anime both are considered beauties but i think mira is prettier and more feminine ...
Tensa-Zangetsu102 chapter 7 . 1/25/2014
Oh come on! Have Naruto and Erza reunite in the next chapter!
ALUCARD chapter 3 . 1/25/2014
ALUCARD chapter 2 . 1/25/2014
I really hate tobi.
meowy1986 chapter 7 . 1/24/2014
i agree..OPing kakashi to low SS wimagine a kage..imagine the 4th or evne madara...hell obito was currently stronger then kakashi..hed be at like ssssssssssss rank or some shit..and im kinda gettign tired of not a single ammount of mention about naruto..tbh i think hes been mentioned what? maybe 1 time thru the whole story..u do know ur not making any naruto character development.. :(
Arai kaji chapter 7 . 1/24/2014
Naruto's teacher Jellal
angel11xpr chapter 7 . 1/24/2014
low SS?

Why would you op characters?, Now imagine what a kage or jiraiya is... low SSSSS?

You have a pretty good plot to try to take plot prolongers from nowhere.
Tensa-Zangetsu102 chapter 6 . 1/23/2014
When are both Naruto and Erza are going to reunite!?
The Awesome Being chapter 5 . 1/23/2014
This seems nice but there's really repetitive stuff that you must try to avoid like stating that erza is beautiful or the whole " damn rules of not killing civilians .." stuff.. regarding pairings i'd like naruto x mira cz you've not mentioned her quite alot yet and i like her and erza is his sister and i hate incest...
Guest chapter 2 . 1/23/2014
You didn't even elaborate on what happened on that night. What the fuck, you're missing a HUGE chunk of story.
redlox2 chapter 5 . 1/22/2014
ok one question... Is Toshiro another child of Minato and Kushina that Kakashi and Yugao adopted or or is the biological son of Kakashi and Yugao who was raised alongside Erza?
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