Reviews for Malevolence
Lord Asmodeus chapter 5 . 1/18
Rin is far too controlling. It does become quite annoying. Naruto should enforce his dominance on her lest she becomes an even greater weakness. The Darkness in Naruto is certainly good however.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/15/2014
Have Naruto fuck rin in the ass
Guest chapter 5 . 2/9/2014
Hmmm Rin...is holding Naruto back...kill her! maim HER! burn her! DISEMBOWEL HER! Ravage Her!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
Cheh Rin...I deplore slapstick...it's disgusting form of mass stupidity, the weak eating the strong...even fascism is better than this!

Joking...it was nice but Rin was quite annoying...

and Naruto isn't evil enough for my tastes
Ulyces chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
Excellent story so far, it may be a little graphic, but that's to be expected, huh? Hope you update soon, and I also hope naruto eventually mellows out a bit. Love the interactions between naruto and rin, but I'm kind of confused about why kakashi being such a douche, though I assume it will be explained.
Fleetfox chapter 5 . 1/4/2014
Awesome!
lazyguy90 chapter 5 . 11/30/2013
Nice work on this.

Interesting stuff.

Keep at it.
FlameFox1 chapter 5 . 11/21/2013
I like it. Do you plan on making an omank in the next chapter?
Jyuubi no Naruto chapter 5 . 11/14/2013
Awesome
anarion87 chapter 5 . 11/8/2013
nice story so far
Guest chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Please add lemon scenes
Guest chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Naruto x Rin
Guest chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Poor naruto cares about Rin?
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2013
I pity naruto
Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
I love this naruto. I hope he get revenge on the villagers
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