Reviews for Malevolent
Guest chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
I love this naruto. I hope he get revenge on the villagers
A W chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
Unless Kakashi is going to use the test to kick out sakura, then that's bullshit.
Orpheus Kidwell chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
This story is great! I love dark naruto stories, and you are very good with this genre. Can't wait for the next chapter!
RandomWriter21 chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
well this Naruto you made is interesting and realistic; seriously the shit he went through and what he is now makes perfect sense. Nice job thus far.
William Nightmare chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Well from what I've read this story just pitched me a curve ball can't wait to see what happens next
lordamnesia chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
Ok, I REALLY like this story! A good way to get Rin into it (since seals really are the ninja way of saying 'screw you reality, I'm doing it my own way'), and the dark Naruto aspect is also very well done. Keep up the great work!
White fox16 chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
I love it, the story so far is getting interesting with each new chap.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
Cool I love this story and the direction it's going.
Cobra0000 chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
- 'Sooner or later they will be begging for his help and he will refuse, he will let them all die.'
Looking forward to this, I hope Naruto will NOT back out of this...
Kestes chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
man this waz awesome! can I assume that the torture scene was inspired by the one kn GTA 5 by Trevor. haha I love that game and I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope to see more in the future
best regards
friaku
Kestes chapter 4 . 10/4/2013
another awesome chapter and I liked naruto's last biy of dialogue. I felt it was pretty well written and I wholeheartedly agree with it. awesome chapter and I hope to see more in the future
best regards
friaku
Doctor Dandy chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
"He didn't want her to see it; she didn't need to see that side of him."

This line sums up the fundamental problem with this story. Either you have a dark Naruto, or you don't. Either you have an emotional Naruto who makes bonds, or you don't. You can't have your cake and eat it too.

Goodbye,

- Thorndsword
Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
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ZariGS chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
An interesting start. I won't comment on much else at this point, seeing as I've only read the first chapter, but this is definitely enough to grab my attention.

It's good to see people trying out new ideas (of which this story could be considered one, since I haven't seen/read anything quite like it yet), but that doesn't mean you should ignore the basics; while reading through this chapter I noticed multiple spelling/grammar mistakes (mostly spelling/word choice though), so it would be in your best interest to either get a beta reader or go over this chapter by yourself again.

This is not to say that your work isn't readable, just that there were minor inconsistencies in how it was presented - with a little bit of time and effort such mistakes can be easily fixed.

Anyways, keep up the good work; you've nailed my favorite sort of chapter length down pat, so kudos to you! :)

-ZGS
Kestes chapter 3 . 10/4/2013
I wonder wbat tje reason behind the four man team the hokage is gonna cook up.
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