| Reviews for Malevolent |
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   Kestes chapter 2 . 10/4/2013 talking about a surprise drop in :p another great chapter and I truly hope to see more in the future best regards friaku |
| Kestes chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 wow this is great. I wonder how the storuly will progress. I hope to see more in the future best regards friaku |
| sabery chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Well i like so far how Naruto interaction with Rin i love to see how the relation going to develop . So what is Naruto goal is gone stay in Konoha or not . |
| Homarid chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Cool mission. Doing it via radio like that seems really smart too. I wonder what happened to Obito if Rin wasn't there to get captured. It seems like Rin disappeared some time before the mission she was captured on if she didn't know Obito was dead. |
| NaruCrazy chapter 3 . 10/4/2013 Why the Fucking Hell is Sakura so important to so many people...I just dont see the point...u got a third member of the team as Rin...just let her fail...:( |
| Homarid chapter 4 . 10/4/2013 Catching the bell in his mouth, lol. I totally didn't see Naruto being the extra in the team coming. That is a pretty interesting idea. I am fairly sure the bloodline is like the rinnegan only it is like Gaara with his sand. Technically the sand is from Gaara's real mother, but I think that is what you are going for. |
| Homarid chapter 3 . 10/4/2013 The introduction of Rin was weird. I like her personality and I think she will be interesting on the team. Since this seems to be general Konoha bashing I am a little surprised to bothered to keep Sakura around. I think you should have ditched her to keep the team size normal. Now you will probably have to add random bad guys to the missions to compensate, blah. Nice chapter though and I liked the fight with Mizuki. I hope you reveal the reason for Naruto's ability soon. |
| girrr chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Rin narutobabies |
| War Sage chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Great chapter |
| plums chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Rim doesn't seem like she would be one to take crap from anyone, so why isn't she reporting Kakashi for his actions towards her and Naruto? |
| Ringdingding chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 wow, i hope you continue this story. not many good naru/rin story out there. |
| dalulzing chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 nice but short |
| InfernoOfChaos chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 This a good dark naruto story. Not a fan time travel though. His killing of his Interrogation target made me cringe. Monkey wrench to the balls is a horrible way to go. |
| sad-mat-000 chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 man this story is awesome! and naruto is even more badass lol the whole fuck y'all attitude is too cool, adding rin makes it even better. not a lot of good stories with rin and naruto in it |
| Damien chapter 5 . 10/4/2013 Wow great story! 10/10 I hope to read more, good job! |