Reviews for The Story of Legolas and Enóreth
Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2019
"You poor tormented creatures!" he murmured to them. "Are all living things beyond escape?"
Bwahahaha! This story is hilarious! I’ve sadly read enough fanfic to see that, tongue-in-cheek though it is, it’s actually not too far off from some stories.
In the meantime, your writing is well done. Thx for the humor
JulsaIthil chapter 12 . 8/26/2019
Wow. I know what his was written YEARS ago no chance The Author’ll reply. I like how this is written. A good written reality/MarySue’ness Poor Legolas.

I love this,
JulsaIthil previously known as MariaJulietBituin
softestsky chapter 12 . 11/6/2015
Beautiful, beautiful. A stunningly crafted satire. I almost died from secondhand embarrassment; poor Legolas!
Whyhow chapter 5 . 3/10/2015
Again, the italics start normally but don't stop for the rest of the chapter.
Whyhow chapter 2 . 3/10/2015
This seems interesting so far. I just wanted to let you know that there is a problem with the formatting of the italics. They continue after the murmur.
Whyhow chapter 4 . 2/1/2015
Interesting story so far. It might be a good idea to check your formatting, though, since when you start italics it continues for the whole chapter.
Nearing Midnight chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
This is an awesome story; gave me a bunch of good laughs. It was extremely well-written, yet it still keeps the satirical theme of a parody. Going straight to my favorites list!
dianaprincess chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
This was one of the funniest parodies I have ever read. I loved it!
Gwen Eruanna chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
Finrond the Purple? That's even worse than those I invent—Alvin the Pale Pink, Easton the Sickly Green, etc. This is so Mary-Sue-ish it's scary. Which is to say, marvellous.
Gwen Eruanna chapter 2 . 4/12/2013
'And as he gazed upon her he sighed, for he knew in his heart that the presence of so fair a maiden could only mean that he would be entangled in an irrational tale of romance ere the day was spent.'
Legolas, Legolas. How well you know the quirks of Fan Fiction.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8/2013
I like this Mary-Sue parody. It's realistic and well-written, and actually has a plot that works to prove the point that Mary-Sues are degenerate, slutty pieces of trash instead of just putting the point there and doing nothing to prove it.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Question for the Middle-Earth characters. What would be worse, being stuck in a Mary-Sue fanfiction or being stuck in a Sauron/Everybody slash/het fic?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Mary-Sues. A common plague across fandoms everywhere. A new type of Mary-Sue has invaded fanfiction. This Mary-Sue infiltrates the mind of the author and transforms itself into a known and otherwise loved character. Please do your best to report Mary-Sues of this kind and all kinds whenever you can, however you can. Thank you, CNell, for writing this informative story that educates new writers to the dangers of the Mary-Sue.
FullMentalPanic chapter 12 . 10/5/2011
Criticizing fanfics and Mary Sues through fanficiton, nicely done.
FullMentalPanic chapter 11 . 10/5/2011
Back to the good stuff.
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