|Reviews for Close to the Edge|
| bleachjenlove chapter 7 . 2/20
Oohh! I love this chappy! It's written very well and I like how there is plot development IPO mentioned as well as dem lulz _ can't wait for next one
| Josh Spicer chapter 7 . 2/4
As a follower of all three of your stories, take your time.
This chapter was...different. It seems somewhat sudden for GlaDOS to show some form of compassion and thoughtfulness, not to mention genuine friendship, this early on. Either she was really afraid of that bird and wishes to owe it to Chell, or this is a ruse.
Or I'm missing something.
| Lady Ambika chapter 7 . 2/3
I love this fic, as a matter of fact this is the first time I read a Portal fic and I really enjoyed it so far, GLaDOS doesn't sound out of character, Blue and Orange are adorable, Chell is just like I imagined in my mind and the plot really pulls you in! I really hope for more chapters soon, this fic is really worth reading.
| shtoops chapter 7 . 1/31
The microphones turn on when she says her name? Lel. That might cause some... Issues in the future.
And I'd like to congratulate you on having something the current console generation doesn't. BACKWARDS COMPATIBILITY! Nice ducking job games industry. This justifies the existence if the Glorious PC Gaming Master Race (TM).
| iammemyself chapter 7 . 1/31
That was adorable! I'm glad GLaDOS finally was able to admit she wanted Chell as a friend :)
| Veleriphon chapter 7 . 1/31
I love it when a plan comes together. Just like Hannibal from "The A-Team"
My curiosity of when there was to be more of this work still burns, just less so now. Fit perfectly.
| bleachjenlove chapter 5 . 1/7
| bleachjenlove chapter 6 . 1/7
I love this story its great :)
| ArtyomTheNormal chapter 6 . 12/30/2013
Well shoot. Having just finished chapter six I am sorely disappointed that there aren't any more chapters to read. The story has been absolutely delightful thus far and I sincerely hope to see many updates in the future. This story manages to stand out against the large plethora of ChelDos stories, providing to the reader all the goodness they would expect while keeping some originality on the side. The inner workings of the story itself are interesting, GLaDOS for example appears to be rather conflicted and/or bipolar in her actions. I like how Chell's character has come along thus far. She is one of the most difficult characters to personify because frankly, she is purposely left as a blank slate in cannon. Long story short, two thumbs up. Hope to see more.
| Josh Spicer chapter 6 . 11/6/2013
When you mentioned the other story took gour months to complete I was thinking "it took four months to read."
Anyway, really enjoying this story, which means I like all three of 'em.
Can't wait for any of 'em.
| iammemyself chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
Poor GLaDOS. She really does deserve those degrees.
| ThatFailGuy chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
All I have to say is, Wow this is great. Can't wait for the the chapter.
| Another Guest chapter 6 . 9/30/2013
Welcome back! :D
This was an awesome chapter, this is the first time I feel bad for the bird D: The stare down part was amazingly well written and so to the point that it captured the correct feelings.
Poor Chell, even with GlaDOS' company she's still on her own :( I hope that changes soon enough!
| imnotraven16 chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
| S.P.A.C.E. Core chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
Just some friendly advice, Chell could not have been in suspension for a couple centuries, the decay is to little. Judging by the decay of the current Aperture it would be twenty MAYBE thirty years. I REALLY don't want to sound like a jerk or put you down, I'm just trying to be helpful.