Reviews for Psycho of the Dead
luketylersmurf chapter 1 . 4/16
Fantastic! imagery and description was perfect! any chance we could get this plus images like a doujin?would support 100%!
akilja95 chapter 27 . 2/20
I can't wait for the next chapter. When will Misuzu have her turn with Seako?
allymooorr chapter 27 . 1/8
Don't listen to the previous comment the story is awesome and I hope you can continue. Viewing his page he's some weird guy that gets off writing lemons about kid cartoons and video games. Your story is infinitely better. You managed to make the characters so much more appealing than their canon selves. Saya and Saeko have become one of my OTP. Don't let the few negative comments get to you because your story is great and many people want to see it continue because it's really good.
silver-blast chapter 1 . 1/5
biggest waste of time. trash story, dont read!
Ref chapter 2 . 12/12/2017
Now, this fic is delightful! I am thoroughly enjoying the throes of violence within, and the sight of a Saeko unleashed. A pleasure, really.
Ulcaasi chapter 27 . 1/29/2017
My oh my this is certainly not the outcome I was expecting... Most interesting...
YamCakes chapter 27 . 1/25/2017
Damn, was hoping Saeko was actually gonna fuck them in front of Souichi... oh well
GoldenWolf X chapter 27 . 1/25/2017
otherbarry6 chapter 26 . 1/19/2017
Thanks so much more the amazing chapter. I hope Saeko finds away to make Shizuka stay and realizes Shizuka wants her to be more selfish and possessive with her. They just really love each other but neither is willing to fully show it
Ulcaasi chapter 26 . 1/5/2017
Heeeeeeeeeeey! So you haven't turned into one of them. Awesome. And this thing still has 10 chapters. Nice! Although I'll admit I was hoping that she would face off the father in this chapter though. Can't wait for more :3
thechampionmike957 chapter 26 . 1/5/2017
Glad to see an update for this story. This chapter sure was a shocker with Yuuki being all cute and Shizuka planning to leave Saeko. While separating might be healthy for both of them I doubt they can part with each other. Shizuka seems to be insecure about where she is placed in Saeko's heart considering all the other girls are far younger than her, making her feel inadequate and unwanted compared to them. If Saeko told her to stay with her I think she would've but I guess it was the right thing not to on her part. She already has four other girls she's having sex with and keeping Shizuka around to see that would only hurt her more, that is unless she starts to accept being in a harem. I hope she doesn't leave because out of all of them I think Shizuka might love Saeko the most. Thanks for the update
Guest chapter 26 . 1/5/2017
So happy to see you post a new chapter. Yuuki was surprisingly cute in this chapter and I'm glad to see that her and the other's won't sleep with Rika. I think it might be for the best that Shizuka leaves them. She gets jealous way too easily and doesn't seem like she would be capable of sharing Saeko like the others are. Not only are the girls younger than she is she now might have to share her with Saya's mom, which I doubt she'd be ok with. Maybe staying with Rika would be for the best for both of them. Hopefully Saeko's harem will comfort are and help her get over her.

Will the story finish with them leaving the estate or will you get up to the mall are with Asami? Also if you do so the mall arc will Asami like Kohta or Saeko because I feel like she would be a really positive influence on Saeko with are nice and sweet personality. Anyway thanks again for the chapter
BiPolarGal chapter 26 . 1/5/2017
waahhh i love u author... Thanks for the update *3*
Pablo464 chapter 25 . 12/1/2016
update please
Metal Navy chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
Hello. I'm here to inform you that this story is in violation of site rules. To quote from the "Rules & Guidelines" section under "Publish";

Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference.

You can't have sexually explicit stories on the site. My suggestion is to move this to a site that allows MA stories such as AdultFanFiction or AO3. Or you can edit out all the MA content to keep it here.

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