Reviews for Avery's Toys
Crystal Hope Dragon chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I loved it, so smutty yet creative. Please keep up the great work.
Sandslasher chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Missed me? I'm glad to see you doing a comeback after 3 years :)
And damn... I don't know but I think your writing style changed quite a bit after all those years. Or I'm just not used to see less puns and references in it like in your older stories. But first things first. I found the story quite cute, especially Avery. He was simply adorable. That one single POV change flaoting in the middle of the story felt a little bit weird but I suppose it was necessary considering where the story was meant to go in First Person POV for it would have seemed too abrupt if done otherwise. The quality of the lemon was, without a doubt, top-notch! Keep it up!