Reviews for My Story
Guest chapter 31 . 10/18/2022
Lol Hinata is all, I'm a virgin I'm shy!
But once she's kissed she's like a fuse, lol
Also omg haku,,, you womenly douche bag!
Way to go Sakura for stepping in!
Sak chapter 30 . 10/18/2022
Go go go Hinata
Sak chapter 29 . 10/18/2022
Omg her hair!
I'm trying to keep with this to see where you're going but it is every single chapter that you go into the past, talk of everything all over again... It is hard not to skip through
Sak chapter 28 . 10/17/2022
Hinata is crying too much over Sasuke.
And seriously , I hate him, I love him. I despise him.
Next sentence.
But I love him so much.
What?
Why?
Sak chapter 27 . 10/17/2022
I'm glad Hinata didn't give up. Lol the cute girl is Hidans daughter ofc!
And please please change the part where you wrote Hinata has a bra size of 39 C.
Maybe you got confused,,, bra size don't work like that. The bigger the cup, the further in the alphabet and the number is for the waist. So she would really be closer to 32 DD or even 32E
Sak chapter 26 . 10/16/2022
Hinata was in the show, the practice run, and she went out with Sasori and tenten before instead? She should have practiced!
Sak chapter 25 . 10/16/2022
Yeah tenten is in love with lee; I dig it!
And the cat and sasori is too cute!
While the new job introduction seemed great, uhm, contract? Salary?
Sak chapter 24 . 10/16/2022
The big meeting is finally over! I'd course they lived her! The panel was well done and the interrogation lol

I'm guessing you're a Christian for all the praying and I respect you bring your faith into a fic you're writing, however Jesus is not God nor the son of God.

God is One
Sak chapter 23 . 10/16/2022
Great chapter
Sak chapter 22 . 10/16/2022
Wait a second, you're 16?
You're an amazing writer!
Sak chapter 21 . 10/16/2022
Omg poor Kin!
Omg sakura PREGGERS
So glad ino is a good friend
Sak chapter 20 . 10/16/2022
Oh gosh it just had to be Kushina who lost her memory!
Sak chapter 19 . 10/16/2022
Hinata must be exhausted from all the emotions!
Sak chapter 18 . 10/15/2022
Omg Hinata, don't go in alone. Lots of drama
Sak chapter 17 . 10/15/2022
Omg wait his room exploded!?
Hinata totally threw Sasuke off of her
And rubbed up against naruto while dancing lol
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