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Home-is-where-your-heart-is chapter 33 . 9/21/2019 Oh god this chapter is so satisfying , I know things may go downhill for Hina again but Idc right now I have waited for this moment for so loong :D I wonder what Hinata will do with Naruto now tho . Thank you for the update |
snhuz chapter 33 . 9/21/2019 I gasped when I saw that you updated! I'm so glad that you're doing well and updating again. I've checked up on this story periodically through the years and I was certainly not expecting to see an update again! Happy writing! I hope you're well! |
SeungJiYeon chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 I SCREEEAMED WHEN I SAW THE UPDATE! I’m shocked beyond words at Hinata’s confidence! It’s so amazing to see how far she’s come, how she’s standing up for herself and how she’s got people around her who are ready to fight for her. I just love it. The only thing that stresses me is Naruto. It’d break my heart if she just plans to use him and manipulate him after he’s apologized and seriously proved himself with the move he made. Oh and I can’t forget to mention that part where Shikamaru greets Hinata only to be ignored...(I looooooved that) |
HollowHolliman12 chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 It’s about to pop off! Hinata is snatching everybody’s wigs! I love it! |
DreamsOfTheDamn chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 So fierce! |
Unfilteredqueen chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 FINALLY IT HAPPENED. AUTHOR IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND MADE MY DAY. I’ve been reading this story forever and have at least two other reviews on it but this has to be my favorite story on fanfiction. Grammar and spelling are great and the plot is so well thought out that I might cry next time it updates. |
PhilosophicalForest chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 Loved it! I'm so glad that you are back for good and continuing this! I love this story to bits. Finally Hinata's free of that jerk, and I'm glad that she's becoming bolder, not showing her emotions in front of Shikamaru, not reacting to Sasuke's glare and finally that wink in the end! Can't wait for Hiashi to get dragged into this, I hope he regrets abandoning her. Excited to see if Hanabi finally shows up too! You missed writing the names of the characters in a few places. The ending court scene, especially, had no names in a couple of dialogue sentences. There were also a few places where it seems as though a few words were missing from in-between. Glad to have you back and at it! |
Koen D chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 I'm glad that Hinata was finally free. Although SasuHina is my OTP, he was a real asshole in this story. I just hope that if you're planning on get Sasuke and Hinata back together, he would have to try a lot. I personally don't mind lemon at all. In fact, I really like them. Please update soon. Your story is awesome. |
J chapter 33 . 9/20/2019 I'm so happy that you continue to update this story! I am loving dark Hinata lol. I think she deserve to have a little revenge against Sasuke after everything. I'm interested in who Hinata will end up with. I think when it comes to Sasuke, there's too much pain for anything to work. I love the Sasori/Hina friendship and I think their friendship is better than any relationship they could have. Since the beginning of this story I always felt chemistry and something more between Hinata and Gaara. I'm rooting for them! There's not enough Gaara/Hina on this site anymore. Can't wait for the next update! |
YellowSage chapter 33 . 9/19/2019 Oh my LORD! I don’t know how you do it but every time you update this story my heart just drops! You’re an amazing writer. I am OBSESSED! Such a good chapter and I’ve been refreshing this story ever since the day you last updated to see if there’s been an update. Lol I’m such a loser but I can’t help my self it is just too good!:D keep up the good work and this definitely made my day. |
SodaPop00 chapter 33 . 9/19/2019 She is finally free! Yay! I wonder wjat sasuke will be plotting |
tenshi pyon chapter 33 . 9/19/2019 I swear hinata has the best gang in the world! And she's so badass! Keep it up hinata XD I wonder when will hinata and sasori go out though. they care for each other even in silence, i can't keep up with their cuteness, it's killing me |
purples.blueeyes chapter 33 . 9/19/2019 I'm so glad you updated. Thank you. |
dear.elle1 chapter 33 . 9/19/2019 omg... this Hinata! She's has a backbone know /proud tears/ |
Rukianbu93 chapter 33 . 9/19/2019 Welcome back :) looking forward to reading more from you again3 |