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Guest chapter 31 . 6/18/2019 It's been a long time since I read this, and I noticed your writing style has matured. It grew and has a sense of maturity in it that I can't remember it ever having when I was a teen. This is really good! I can't wait to read more of this and get back into the story. |
DarkInuPrincess8893 chapter 31 . 6/18/2019 I have been in love with this story for years! I remember staying up late and binge reading it in high school. You still are an amazing writer keep up the great work. |
CrazyChimera chapter 31 . 6/17/2019 Ok. I started reading this today (when I was supposed to be working on a paper) and well. I can say I enjoyed it. A few things grew to be tiring at some points, but you're kinda growing out of using the same tools over and over, I respect that. I REALLY hope it doesn't end in Sasuhina. I love the pairing, I love the dinamics, but I just kinda feel like it would be wrong, thinking of the character arch of the characters. (Sorry for the gaffe, I just really needed to let this out, specially since it's a key that keeps being hit, every time Hinata starts to think of going back to being just Sasuke's wife I just get really sad, a bit angry.) Overall a good fanfic. Take your time, do your stuff, people don't heal linearly and you should always prioritize your health. I love how you're hinting at Sakura and Hinata getting closer and I'd love to ask. Did Haku really did it all for the promotion? |
Guest chapter 31 . 6/17/2019 I cannot express at how grateful I am you’re continuing this! I read it earlier this year and was super sad you stopped updating. Keep it up, it’s honestly one of the best stories I’ve ever read. |
Veraozao chapter 31 . 6/17/2019 love it, kiss |
WindsorQueen chapter 31 . 6/16/2019 I Need moreeeeeee pleaseeeee! I'm dying please let Sakura/Hinata be friends, I would die thou if hinata's first time was w Sakura, it would be kinda hilarious w so many men after her, OMG now I totally want to read that aaaaaaaa, also Sasuke is a dock in this, wouldn't find it bad if hinata just said fuck it and just gets hot and heavy w everyone, I really need to read some poly romance sasuhinasaku or just harem w hinata as the main right now, but like can they pretty please be friends? |
Home-is-where-your-heart-is chapter 31 . 6/15/2019 Wow ! You really updated ! I really can't believe this , I am so happy . Hinata should be more careful from now on , I hope she learnt her lesson and she figured out that this industry is full of snakes that will take any chance they get to bite her . Can't wait to read more of this story Ps: I am really happy for you and proud of you , I hope life will always treat you well |
Guest chapter 31 . 6/15/2019 I'm not going to lie, Hinata makes me really want to slap her. She is continuously making the same mistakes when she had a guidebook on this shit and should know better by now. I mean, she was betrayed by her spouse, her blood relative, and a long time friend and crush. What makes her blindly trust her dignity with some nobody that she just met? And why will she even attend the party of her ex-husbands that she only came to know about through the mouth of one of his mistresses. The woman is out to get you. Do not trust a word out of that bitch's mouth. I also understand that forgiveness is good for the mind and soul, but I feel like everyone is allowed to be angry at the people who have wronged them. Forgiveness takes time as well. I also do not consider Sakura that dynamic of a character at this point either. The only reason she helped her was because Hinata, a women who's husband she was fucking, defended her. Otherwise, she would had let Hinata get humiliated. She did speak on Hinata's dead mother. She ain't shit for that. I cannot fing myself sympathizing with Naruto, Shikamaru, Sakura, or Neji. Now everybody feels guilty after everything is said and done but were all on board with humiliating Hinata. Now, I don't think they deserves the death penalty or anything, but they should get some form of karma for messing with someone's life. If the truly had a moral compass, the should have been felt bad about fucking over, or helping fuck over, someone who hasn't wronged them in any way, dhape, or form. Don't try to be on her team now that she is gaining more people on her corner. A bunch of fickle pricks in my opinion. I just want Hinata to be an independent woment and not a naive girl in constant need of saving because she just refuses to learn from her past. I see that she usually has the right frame of mind at some points, but then she goes on to ignore it, resulting in another humiliating moment. For instance, when she is with Haku, she starts thinking that maybe he is not the most trustorthy person given the crowd he is associated with. Then she goes on to ask him if he likes her. She just shuts out what her instincts are telling her only to get shitted on in the end. It like she's deciding to cross the street despite seeing a car driving down it at high speed. What else can she expect to happen. It starting to get hard for me to feel sorry for her. All in all I do love this story. I just had my concern. Maybe I'm doing the most with this dissertation and you have bigger and better plans for these characters in the future. The story has gotten me emotionally invested because I can draw so many parallels between me and Hinata. |
DUH BOMB chapter 31 . 6/14/2019 Fuck that was messed up. Poor emotionally/sexually repressed Hinata. Konan tried to warn her but Sakura saved her. Hinata should've known by the type of people Haku was around the type of person he was. Glad you're back though keep it up. |
Shikara Gizzel chapter 31 . 6/14/2019 Its one of my most favorite story.. I am glad ur updating.. |
aries-heart chapter 31 . 6/14/2019 I'm so glad you came back. I started reading this after you went on break in 2014 but I couldn't wait for you to come back like I knew you would. I'm glad you got your self together, life can be real stressful I really loved this chapter and I really love how its coming along |
Hart Matters chapter 11 . 6/14/2019 I had to start reading this story the moment I saw the amount of reviews, I knew it had to be a hit! Me being me, went on to start with the most updated chapter. I don't really care for "spoilers" as much as I care about how things happen, which is why i don't mind skipping chapters. That being said, I'm on chapter 11 and the Hinata in Chapter 31 is the same Hinata that I just read. That either means that this a very very extremely slow burn type of deal or there is lack of character development. I'm not the only one that has noticed this as there have other reviews stating so. Hinata just seems to be shat on by every character in this story so far. No one seems to be her friend, aside maybe Gaara and Tenten. I don't think either of them have said anything bad to/about her. Not as of chapter 11 anyway. I get the notion of "tough love", but it's a little ridiculous that everyone is telling her the brutal truth and yet 20 chapters later, she's still the same person. There's nothing wrong with making Hinata a patient and kind person, but it seems that she's a static character if she keeps making excuses for people. Hinata needs to stop being a people pleaser and start gaining confidence in herself and her actions. Who knows, maybe I'll see character development where she stands up for herself and sticks to it in the future chapters. I do not think this is a bad story, I just think Hinata needs to have more dimension to her character. Like someone else said, the summary for this makes it seems that Hinata is going to break free from being a submissive wife to becoming a strong independent woman. So I hope that it happens, and I hope that it is soon. |
Guest chapter 31 . 6/14/2019 I'm so happy you decided to continue the story. Hope you can update soon, thank you! |
zee chapter 31 . 6/14/2019 Just wow! First of all i'm really happy to know that everything's going good in your life. Secondly i'm even happier at the fact that you finally updated. This story has been one of my favorites of all times. So i kindly ask(more that like begging you) to see this story till the end. i swear i almost started crying when i saw the update. |
Guest chapter 31 . 6/14/2019 I’m honestly so shook rn! I remember starting to read this story at 14 lol. It’s good to have you back! I wondered where you disappeared off to considering back then, this was one of my favorite stories on the site but I figured it had to do with living life and wasn’t pressed about it. I honestly almost forgot about this one so I really do mean it when I say it’s so good to have you back. ~K |