|Reviews for Pure Gold|
| LittlemissTrafalgar chapter 1 . 2/18
I like the story! Really! But i am curious of something... If Luffy is a Straw Hat Pirate then they met once in a past? Since Shanks owned the Straw Hat after Roger and gave it to Luffy, right? So they must be friends at some time or they knew each other.
I would like to point out something too, If Sabo didn't meet Ace he wouldn't be with Dragon or the Revolutionary Army. He will be forever trap in nobilty and will be another person by chance. But this is your fic so whatever XD I still like your story of Ace raised by different characters and being happy that his father is Roger cause hey, You don't see it so often. :D
| Ashley Antwolf chapter 1 . 1/5
Really love this. Honestly, I really want to see the Whitebeard and Rayleight scenarios expanded.
I have voted too, I hope this story wins!
| silverwolf1249 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
all I can say is... PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! If you already did I will be reading it soon.
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
This was great. I really like the bit at the end how no matter what changes happen through time, the Bond of Brothers in the ASL will forever stand strong.
| Partsu chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Pure Gold indeed!
| JumpingBeans480 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I loved it.
| Ujvari chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
This was cute! Why did I only read it now?
I had to pay a little attention to the hopping between the different scenarios, but it was not too confusing.
Overall, nicely done.
| CelestialxXxAngel chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
It will be really nice to see another story like this.
| Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
This is epic, and marvelously characterized and in sync with typical OP humor and madness and just an awesome read all around. Extra love for that last scene, even though Marco panicking was a close second favorite and every Shanks scene not far behind that. The "talks" scenes were absolutely inspired XP I'd run too, Ace...
| Keirra chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Ahhhh! I love these ideas! Aside from not having Luffy and Sabo as brothers everything in Ace's live you have been so much different (dare I say better?) if only Roger had been a tad pickier who he asked to watch after his kid, or perhaps asked Garp to take Ace to one of these men. Now I want to see full stories of their adventures with a little Ace, especially Marco panicking while trying to care for a baby. Love it.
| K.E.Alvarez chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
That was really good! I can't help but agree that if Ace had been raised by pirates that respected his father he would have grown up happier. I can see Roger's reasoning that giving him to Garp might ensure he took a different path to keep him out of trouble, but blood will tell as it did... On a different note, if Ace grew up with Shanks then he would have met Luffy when they landed on Dawn island :D THAT could make a cool follow-up one-shot.
| Odd Reader chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Ace not hating Roger? THE WORLD MUST BE ENDING.
Although, this is an awesome AU. I liked the Crocus and the Whitebeard ones in particular. Suppose Ace's medical ability is higher now? (Whitebeard, you're teaching a kid how to make children? I really want to see who told him in the end...)
Now, does this mean Ace becomes a Whitebeard Pirate anyway? Or are the Spade Pirates just booty-kicking enough to their own crew? If I remember correctly, the Spade Pirates were sailing the seas pretty nicely, and then they ran into Jinbe, and then things snowballed from there...
The last section was the part I keep on reading over and over. They don't even know each other, and yet they're three-way rivals? Just... Wow. Sabo, you kick ass. Luffy, you kick ass. Ace, everyone knows you kick ass, just look at your bounty!
You may expand one these scenarios with popular demand and inspiration? I can't help with inspiration, but I have the 'popular demand' down flat! XD Could you expand on the Crocus scenario?
Thanks for posting!
| rains drop chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
I wonder if luffy and ace met at some point in the past. After all, shanks did come to luffy's village right? And that strawhat... Well, I hope I can see the continuation of this brilliant work XD
| petite.hope chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Weell, what should I say... this story fits the title- Pure Gold :')
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Still my favourite ace fanfic :)