|Reviews for Loss of Control|
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 16 . 4/20/2017
I face-palmed so hard when I read the end of this chapter. Dang, you just had to go bring poor Harry into this. It was unabashedly hilarious and so much fun. Wait, does this mean that various other rulers of the afterlife, like Hades and Hela exist?
| HikariKurayami88 chapter 16 . 7/16/2016
Overall awwww,but you could have totally expanded on some scenes like the last for example. I mean he is not the only one with brown eyes... -_-
Still overall a very nice and quite refreshing (for me at least) story. It had it's cute, thrilling, exciting (in more ways than one ;D) moments. Language wise it is also very good. The only remark I have is that you focus too much on the pregnancies in the beginning and rush what else happens plot wise either in between the lemons or into that one I found chapter. I would have found it better if you had also elaborated on the conspiracy interspersed with what happens in real world/soul society...
Ps. I totally didn't know I was rereading this story so when I tried posing this and it said I had already reviewed this chapter I was quite confused... such a doofus I am XD
| Mumia0813 chapter 2 . 1/21/2016
*nosebleed* wow...0.0 *faints due to lack of blood*
| countrylovinfangirl chapter 17 . 9/18/2015
Amazing! I love it a lot! Please continue soon!
| DefendTheUndefended chapter 11 . 8/31/2015
I laughed for an hour on how Gin drugged Aizen...HILARIOUS! ROTFL! Awesome!
| KatherineC1998 chapter 11 . 7/13/2015
HAHA~ XDD That ending! Im so done! -dies of uncontrolable laughter-
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
I like how you slowly worked into the idea of needing a powerful mate, with the discomfort and craving.
| DarkTragedy chapter 16 . 5/11/2015
you killed it...
it was good until it became a crossover
there's nothing wrong with crossovers it was just a little too late in the story and I feel unnecessary.
| angelaneahwalker chapter 17 . 1/6/2015
my favorite part, was when harry appeared...that was awesome...
| aya -.- desu chapter 17 . 11/8/2014
This is cool...
What took you so long, aizen!? You make my baby boy cry! #huh?
| HelleBelle chapter 16 . 9/12/2014
Well wasn't expecting to see Harry but hey it makes sense LOL
| HelleBelle chapter 15 . 9/12/2014
I'm with Grimm on this one. What did just happen?
| HelleBelle chapter 14 . 9/12/2014
Uh oh O.o
| HelleBelle chapter 13 . 9/12/2014
Oh man you can't do this to meeeee TT. I have never laughed so hard in my life . Damn I wish I could have been in the meeting. Oh well back to the story I go.
| HelleBelle chapter 12 . 9/12/2014
Wait a minute, wait a damn minute...You can't tell me any shit like that... I got waaaaaaaaay to excited for my own good. Kami help me! Sweet baby juju. Sorry about that I had a moment of sexual insanity as my sister likes to call it LOL.