|Reviews for Tales of a Disgruntled Hobbit|
| multyfangirl18 chapter 26 . 7/23
it's not that smutty , it's kinda on the borderline between a description that leads the imagination without going into that many details and smut
did you get an interesting haircut to do some thing about missing those large chunks of hair? you know, have the chunks be part of a cut design
it doesn't sound like you're disabled , you could say that you are to get discounts or sympathy or something , but you sound like your more able then most anyone would be unless they either were recently getting those problems or letting themselves be disabled.
cool , another sequel. thank you
| multyfangirl18 chapter 21 . 7/23
thank you for not pairing family members up , still thinking about the founding of the fellowship. man Frodo would notable weight behind his word , Gimli , possibly Legolas
| multyfangirl18 chapter 20 . 7/21
i'm remembering and thinking of how the fellowship of the ring would be in this version , "strangers of distant lands... actally most of you would have had a chance to meet Frodo and Bilbo by now. the only real stranger would be you Boromir son of Denethor. "
lets see Gimli , he and Frodo grew up together , Legolas he would have met during several of the trade visits , Strider he might have had a chance to meet from is visits to the Shire.
| multyfangirl18 chapter 19 . 7/21
you can get a lot of middle earth research done with just the books of the two towers and the return of the king by reading whats in the back.
Dwarves only have one love in their lifetime so Brunna is an idiot to try and seduce Thorin away from Bilbo , and the dwarf ladies trying for Fili are fools.
| multyfangirl18 chapter 18 . 7/21
lol , well that ended very funnily
| multyfangirl18 chapter 15 . 7/17
i've heard what those piercings are meant to do but thank goodness i was only a couple years younger then i am now so i didn't loose a great deal of innocence from it,
and Dis is having a great time watching what trouble a couple of the boys have gotten themselves into , and for once her young boys aren't the one causing the trouble. she'd probably have a bucket of popcorn if she could have before taking a nap with the adorable one
| multyfangirl18 chapter 14 . 7/17
i'm not sure of it was the story before this or if it was another story but the wrestling bit reminds me of the time that Frodo found that one book that he saw the pictures in it and asked Bilbo " uncle? why are these people wrestling? " i was almost sure that Bilbo was going to have that book burned , who keeps an elvish book that has that kind of stuff in it? in a dwarf mountain? :) lol.
and Thorin gets saddled into having to give Frodo the talk.
| multyfangirl18 chapter 10 . 7/16
one i love those characters who are nice and quiet on the out side and when they get to the point where they explode they show a lot more strength then they look to have. to be able to fling someone out of the door and turn back to a family member and say something sweetly. lol :) - very amused smile
| multyfangirl18 chapter 9 . 7/16
i can't help but wonder how long it would take nearly every other dwarf to learn that there are at least 13 high ranking dwarves who love and protect a pair of hobbits living with them and it's bad for anyones health to try and at the very least look at them wrong. :) - amused smile
| multyfangirl18 chapter 7 . 7/15
LOL! that child is going to be very different from her parents when they were younger , oh she's going to have attention from the whole royal family as shes growing up , if anyone looks at her wrong and makes the wrong move from acrossed the room from her they're going to regret it and she's going to have so much stuff gifted to her as she grows up that she'll just about never want for anything. she's so cute
| multyfangirl18 chapter 6 . 7/15
lol at the insults to the elves , poor woodland dwellers
i forgot , is this one of the lesser known breeds of Hobbit fanfiction where it follows the book rather then the movie?
they need more hobbits in the mountain to cushion between the elves and dwarves
| SegaGenesis1 chapter 17 . 7/1
Some oc's are badly written, which is probably what gets them the bad reputation. However, I like how you'very written the characters and they fit well with your story line.
| Lupinica friggasdoiter chapter 26 . 6/30
This was awesome! Love the ending. Clumsy frodo and exasperated Thorin.
| PlaidOtaku chapter 22 . 4/27
Aww a Legolas chapter was so unexpected! But well appreciated! Love it! And only a few chapters left?! Oh nooooo
| PlaidOtaku chapter 19 . 4/24
I had to get up and walk around the house when I read Frodo's question XD I was also trying (and failing) to not laugh loud enough to make my whole house think I'm crazy XD