Reviews for They Come and They GO but What If They Stay?
Guest chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
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JenP chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
I'm loving this story so far ... more please
JenP chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
I'm loving this story so far ... more please
Mistydeb chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
Yay he got his mate in the end. Thk god he didn't try to fight the cullens, Edward may have had to stand up to the major - that would have been fun. Thks for the update, Debbie
YesIAmAGenieus chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I think you are off to a good start, and I like the concept of this story. However, and I'm not trying to be mean, your writing seems very fragmented and jumpy and the grammar is very incorrect, making it difficult to read. Once again, I don't want to be mean, I'm only tying to help.
Mistydeb chapter 2 . 3/7/2013
It is an interesting concept so far :)
Froots chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
I love it so far and can't wait for more! Though you might wanna think about a beta, to correct the grammer and stuff :)
Marie One chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Okay I am on the ride.