Reviews for Marry Me
aaabbbcc chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
GUMBALL RINGS ! clearly the best kind!
Mysty Star chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Aww, i feel so warm and fuzzy! That was really sweet! I loved it, great job. Really.
Codby chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
"Oh god what have I done." ... You made again something so Sweet that I melted and became pudding 3
GeekDad chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
This was perfect. Another amazing story. Nice job.
Samian chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
This was quite the nice piece, although I do wonder what the original might have looked like.

Now for the elephant in the room, the smuttiness.
It's not really visible that it's your first time writing this but that could be due to the fact that you've already written so much. The actions themselves aren't unnatural or awkward, for as far as I can tell.
While I'm sure that you'll improve upon this in the future I couldn't possibly imagine how at this point in time.

Congratulations, your smuttiness was quite good. :)
winged-saetta chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Soooooo friggin adorable! :3 I love it!
Ninja girlfriend chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
the ending was really cute :3
Shokugeki no DxD chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
This was an excellent story. You did great with it. I loved it.
sisterskeeper chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
You have er... Are about done something horrible and unforgive if you don't write a sequal or another chapter in which everyone flips out because they can't find Artemis or Wally.
Irenerb chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Love it :)